Egg, because he's Egg in my head now, needs to stop writing in that damned journal and just burn it already. It's stressing me out. Anyways, hopefully this summer islands venture would get them much knowledge and funds also hopefully both egg and dany gets some practice ruling free people, i mean if they still want to return to westeros and sit the iron throne

I do hope he is actually Aegon

what please update this story.

Please continue this novel dude. That's great

also a hot air balloon might Barely be doable but a dirigible wouldn't. a balloon that can float a mile up is ridiculously useful for keeping an eye on enemy movements. you could probably spot enemies a weeks march away with a hot air balloon.

a revolver of any sort isn't simple. muskets were around fur hundreds of years before the first practical revolver was made.

same with balloons. they aren't effective at the current economic and Manufacturing capacity of planetos.

I know this probably won’t help, but please make Aegon as Rhaegar’s son. Making Aegon a Blackfyre has been done so many times already and keeping him as Rhaegar’s son sounds much more interestingto read.
And I think it is impossible for Jon to be able to remember how someone looked that died like 10 years before and a son doesn’t have to look like his father anyway, you can make it so that he has some features of his mother.

Bro where is this UPDATE!

Please don't make him a Blackfyre. Also, why do you have a problem with his blood relation relationships I mean you are writing about House Targaryen, what else do you expect? There's are reason they keep their bloodline pure so that they are the only ones who can control the dragons and also that they don't lose they dragon control ability from lack of dragonlord blood.

Nice

Very nice

I like it. I hope you continue with the Aegon/Dany pairing. It would reconcile House Blackfyre and House Targaryen if you choose to make him turn out as a Blackfyre. If not then Margaery would probably do in a pinch.

Please update soon already!

Where’s the new update?!

I hope he is really Aegon because seriously every story with Aegon Targaryen being a SI ends with him being a fake and going from there so it would be an interesting change since while it does make it easier for him to claim the throne it also means that everyone that hates the Targaryens now hates him whilst if he were a Blackfyre he can present himself as a “new” side.