Reviews for REVELATIONS
helenemc chapter 1 . 6/10/2018
My heart went out to Bella when she saw Edward at the diner. Great story! hope you expand it.
mo kagen chapter 1 . 6/1/2018
Possibilities...

Thank you!
TrulyOutrageous chapter 1 . 5/21/2018
Good reading!
Mylisssa chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
Aww...I had a few tears with this one. I feel like I could understand where every single person was coming from. I like how it ended with Bella having hope for the future. I’d be interested in reading more of her journey if you decide to expand.
jen5795 chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
That was amazing and I really hope that you continue this story. I want to know what happened prior to this and why happens after.
Honeymoon Edward chapter 1 . 5/9/2018
Aw, man. That was heart wrenching. Good luck in the contest. :)
Longing to Write chapter 1 . 5/9/2018
Healing can begin now for all of them.
jermak99 chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
Oh man, this was heartbreaking! My chest hurts! What a terrible secret Alice kept! Poor Bella! I would love to see this continued! Good luck :)
KM525 chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
Wow. That was gut-wrenching, and intriguing, and left me hopeful (for more, please!)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
She was entirely too quick to let that piece of shit back into her life.
ladylibre chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
Gripping from the very beginning, and I LOOOOVED your Rosalie :-)

Best of luck in the contest!
piesmom chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
Please continue
My Friend Alice chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
This one is my favorite so far! I loved the angst and the hopeful impression of leaves the teaser with as to a HEA.
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
What a wonderful story of truth bringing hope
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twilghtphd chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
so intense...so very well written. thank you
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