The chapter 5

The chapter 4

Balance Breaker: a bug and a feature.

You hate to see it, but it is inevitable. The best fics are never completed.

Such a same since this was soooo good, and had so much more potential.

QUE PASA NO LAS VAS A CONTINUAR

Please update if ya ain’t dead

Again this was really good. I like how it isn't trying to interfere with DxD canon too much, but is on the background having their own adventures. I like it (granted idk much about dxd. I really hate how they sexualize and the fucking power ups of issei. I mean they ignore fucking devils angels and magic in favor of breasts. I really dislike that)

hey bud, I don't know if you plan on writing anymore or if you're even on here anymore, but if you ever feel like getting back into your stories on here please please please update this and Hellfire. those are both great stories. if you don't then please let someone you trust to write them well take them.

I'm not trying to insult you or anything, I just want these stories badly. they have terrific setups and the intros to them are excellent. you're character writing is good and while grammar isn't amazing, it's definitely not the worst I've seen on here.

anyway, hope you're doing good in life.

I really really hope you pick this up again someday. It's excellent.

Fuck Amaterasu with rusted razor.

Great story so far! I hope that you continue it at some point!

I liked the chapter but wouldn't Tensa Zangestu be his true name since a zanpakuto is the manifestation of a shinigami's soul and bankai is the true form of a zanpakuto. They even touched on this in the thousand year blood war where Ichigo says that he doesn't have a partner but he is the sword and the sword is him.

he could have found her with the spirit ribbons

would really like if ichigo used shinigami powers more often and not some powers he got from god and which he cant even use well

well written but boring chapter ichigo didint do anything but sit and watch. so boring