Reviews for Master to Legend: Alola Segment |
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SILVERE ESPADACHIN chapter 1 . 17h Sure you can write very well but I don't like the stories of "Ash is betrayed by all his friends" they are ridiculous and inescapable |
KiraiZero chapter 11 . 10/15 wait wait did the grunts actually do that to the girls or not I sure as hell hope not ash will destroy everything |
Guest chapter 11 . 9/22 Please update |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14 Please update |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/26 Please update |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/28 Please update |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/26 Please update |
monsterkillers124 chapter 10 . 7/28 no one complain he said he'd make this list I'm looking at you guest reviewers |
monsterkillers124 chapter 1 . 7/23 to all guest reviewers STOP SAYING PLEASE UPDATE THEY UPDATED IT NOT THAT LONG AGO also to the author great story pal and can't wait to see your next chapter i enjoy your take on the Ash betrayed look |
monsterkillers124 chapter 4 . 7/21 I thought you said Necrozma was a girl not a male |
monsterkillers124 chapter 3 . 7/21 Alan needs an I to make it Alain if you meant the guy with Mega Charizard X also bedd needs to be need your rest |
monsterkillers124 chapter 1 . 7/20 spelling needs to be checked but good chapter |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/16 Please update |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/10 Please update |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6 Please update |