Reviews for That Twerp is Trouble
randomidiot1816 chapter 1 . 10/18/2018
damn ash is breaking so many laws of the universe that he could be the breakthrough to time machines
Elsil chapter 1 . 6/18/2018
This was... bizarre? Wacky? Entertaining? Perhaps all of them.

~Elsil
Phantom Dark-Knight chapter 1 . 5/22/2018
For some reason, i find this rather a boring story.
This story ONLY focusing on female character wanted to bed with ash instead of Ash interest looking for a girlfriend, and there completely lack of feeling n very dull connect to this story.

Seem like u need a lot of practice writing good lime story
partner555 chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
What a fun and nonsensical ride. In case you're wondering, since this is meant to be light-hearted and non-serious, I went with the flow and avoided picking out any grammar issues.
bladetri chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
like XD
PanickingNoob94 chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
lol That was hilarious ah it was nonsense but that 1 of the entertaining nonsense I am sure X3.
61394 chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Good Story
Master of the Mind chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
I expected sex scenes and didn't get any. It was pretty fun to read though.
SIAMES chapter 1 . 4/30/2018
Cheesy.
1995hzq chapter 1 . 4/30/2018
Will you write the sex scenes?
DonPJuan chapter 1 . 4/30/2018
lol funny little ficlet that you wrote here keep up the great work.
Apex85 chapter 1 . 4/30/2018
AHAHAHAHAHAHAH! God my sides XD! I can't stop laughing over this. Good work Ash, you did great.
Cottonmouth25 chapter 1 . 4/30/2018
This was hilarious. The numerous lampshade-hanging comments were all spot-on, the entire situation was just amusingly absurd, and Ash’s entire multi-region team is apparently made up of the best bros ever. As well as whatever the female equivalent of “bros” is.

Also, I’m now head-canoning “Ashling” as the term used to describe any spawn of Ash’s. That was really funny.

I’m normally hesitant about favoriting M-rated fics, but this is something I have no regrets about. Thanks for a hilarious read!
Fox McCloude chapter 1 . 4/30/2018
Ah, the woes that come with being popular with the ladies. Hehe, you're not in a hurry to be a grandma, are you, Delia? XD

Really, this was pretty fun, even already knowing how it was gonna end.