Reviews for That Twerp is Trouble |
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randomidiot1816 chapter 1 . 10/18/2018 damn ash is breaking so many laws of the universe that he could be the breakthrough to time machines |
Elsil chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 This was... bizarre? Wacky? Entertaining? Perhaps all of them. ~Elsil |
Phantom Dark-Knight chapter 1 . 5/22/2018 For some reason, i find this rather a boring story. This story ONLY focusing on female character wanted to bed with ash instead of Ash interest looking for a girlfriend, and there completely lack of feeling n very dull connect to this story. Seem like u need a lot of practice writing good lime story |
partner555 chapter 1 . 5/5/2018 What a fun and nonsensical ride. In case you're wondering, since this is meant to be light-hearted and non-serious, I went with the flow and avoided picking out any grammar issues. |
bladetri chapter 1 . 5/2/2018 like XD |
PanickingNoob94 chapter 1 . 5/2/2018 lol That was hilarious ah it was nonsense but that 1 of the entertaining nonsense I am sure X3. |
61394 chapter 1 . 5/1/2018 Good Story |
Master of the Mind chapter 1 . 5/1/2018 I expected sex scenes and didn't get any. It was pretty fun to read though. |
SIAMES chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 Cheesy. |
1995hzq chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 Will you write the sex scenes? |
DonPJuan chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 lol funny little ficlet that you wrote here keep up the great work. |
Apex85 chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 AHAHAHAHAHAHAH! God my sides XD! I can't stop laughing over this. Good work Ash, you did great. |
Cottonmouth25 chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 This was hilarious. The numerous lampshade-hanging comments were all spot-on, the entire situation was just amusingly absurd, and Ash’s entire multi-region team is apparently made up of the best bros ever. As well as whatever the female equivalent of “bros” is. Also, I’m now head-canoning “Ashling” as the term used to describe any spawn of Ash’s. That was really funny. I’m normally hesitant about favoriting M-rated fics, but this is something I have no regrets about. Thanks for a hilarious read! |
Fox McCloude chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 Ah, the woes that come with being popular with the ladies. Hehe, you're not in a hurry to be a grandma, are you, Delia? XD Really, this was pretty fun, even already knowing how it was gonna end. |