This is wonderful! I can’t wait for more.

Awesome chapter loved it

Can't wait for more!

Phew that was close. I guess her men though her dead else they wouldn't have abandonned her in the ruins. You depict her state of exhaustion so well, I feel like laying down on the sofa now :p
And where is Faramir ?
Anyway. Another brilliant chapter.

Can't wait for more!

What the heck where did the next button go?
This story is really good and I think it's impressive how natural Nemireth's character development is, it's one of the biggest areas where I struggle. Great job!

Oooof

I loathe Denethor so much

wow I can't believe you killed Xiphos I'm really mad at you

I got chills
Oh my gosh this was amazing

Nemireth, my friend, that was an extremely stupid thing to do
But at least she's not a Mary Sue

Oh my gosh are you gonna do a legolasxoc? If so it was a very good idea to not put it in the summary because otherwise I never would have clicked it! Good story so far

Oh my gosh you portrayed this perfectly the way she's tempted by the ring... I'm so happy that you didn't go the usual tenth walker route.

Ah, damn !
I though she had done a tremendous job in this battle. You kept me panting the whole time, what a battle !
I am so happy that her men made such a difference, and if Faramir can get back in better shape, we'll all be glad for it just as well. She is learning to fall back at the right time, and the psychological process is so very well described.
Your writing is som amazing !
You've been a general in a past life, I'm sure of it :p

I just want to point something out in relevance to royal titles. I believe a King/Queen is to be addressed as “your majesty” while a prince/princess is addressed as “your highness”. Gandalf should be a addressing the King higher than he would the princess. That is all