Please continue

This is very...meh? It's kind of interesting but a bit heavy on the self-depreciation and angst. I know with a first person view there would be a lot of introspection but the level of it and How it feels like it adds nothing is a bit much guy. Some times it feels like your trying to be clever but he just comes off as boring and whiney. But what is good about this is the level of technical detail you put into this almost effortlessly from the description of characters and weapons to how much money he gets there is alot there. Keep going and maybe up the pace just a tiny bit.

The ending is very confusing i would go back and clean it up, i know it is supposed to be from max pov but a narrator pov is much better to relate what is happening

Before you finished the first paragraph I was already imagining Ereshkigal. I would like to say it is because I saw some hint of it before, but the truth is that I have wanted her in more stories for a while now so I decided that I would imagine her as this new character. She is my favorite F/GO character after all.

Was hoping for a Riveria x Max

Yeah, really not a fan of your fic. Maybe it's just not for me. You wax and wax on about irrelevant stuff, and you simply skip the things that should have been focused on. Then you follow it up with an asspull because drama! To top it all off, you STILL haven't gotten to the point where your intro is relevant to anything; what the hell is an empty throne? Is it edible? Why is there not even a fucking mention, 70k words in ?! Is the protagonist gonna commit to improving himself instead of sightseeing?

This needs less waxing poetically about bullshit, and more focus on the plot.

Isn't Ryuu's hair light green at this time?

The thing about the industrial revolution and the like, fails to take into account the difference in environment and culture.

Our own history was a product of very specific circumstance, and there’s no reason for another society, especially one with Gods and magic, to develop along the same lines. Hell, there are immortal elves here.

Does scarcity exist in the same way? Is there even a need for a more streamlined means of production? If not, why would there be factories? Everything in Orario is powered by magic rocks, taken from monsters.

The cherianthropes and evolution, is evolution a thing in this world? Doubtful, the Gods are there after all, and we don’t really get to know much about what they got up to back in Tenkai. Hell, we know that going to Orario is pretty much a vacation, but before the Dungeon existed, what was their amusement? Maybe creating races like Cherianthropes.

God this is so good! I'm excited for the next chapter!

nice too forget to put the right chapter

nice

For a good few months, I thought this was abandoned. In any case, the latest chapter went by quick. I don't have any major complaints for it, besides the fact that not much really happens for the first half. The character development on Max's end was appreciated, but I feel like Eresh's introduction was a bit unexciting. As for where the story is headed, all I have are guesses. but I'm looking forward to it. Welcome back, author.

I hope you dont make this into a shitty harem or something

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