Reviews for Secret Star
Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 7/18
Will someone sue over the rigged contest?
Winxer4ever chapter 1 . 3/20
Awww, that was sooo beautiful! I loved it! x
liliana765 chapter 3 . 8/25/2018
Perfect! The two are so sweet. Please continue soon. Such cute chapters always improve my day :)
Sara chapter 3 . 8/17/2018
Very cute :)
Flora chapter 2 . 5/6/2018
Amazing story. Can you write a chapter as Helia paint the picture and Flora poses him naked? When she posed for Roxy :)
catspats31 chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Ariana Grande's "Let Me Love You", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story because the owners of this site have no legal permission from the songwriters.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired copyrights, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.
liliana765 chapter 2 . 5/6/2018
Wow, Flora as Lily Rose is pretty wild :) But when did she do it everything when she did not go to party? And even though she says that she's "still normal Flora" and that "Lily Rose is dead", I think it's not true. Even now she acts like Lily Rose :) But it's cute that she make songs about Helia :)
lifeasmarah chapter 2 . 5/3/2018
Loved it keep going :))
lifeasmarah chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
I love your story :)))
winxkate chapter 2 . 5/3/2018
I have to say that I was satisfied with one-shot, but we'll see where it goes. But I do not like drunk Flora. I understand that it belongs to life "superstar" but cautiously :-) Will you continue soon the story Blown Away?
Sara chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Very beautiful. I liked Flora in this story.
angelladyspring chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
Sexy Flora? Now that's something I haven't seen yet. Sort of makes me wanna write that, too
winxkate chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Are not Flora and Helia cute? :-) Wonderful idea. I like Flora and her "double life".
liliana765 chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Perfect! Will it be continued or is it a one-shot?