| Reviews for Vacation In Heat |
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   AndyFroemel chapter 2 . 7/13 Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed Champions Revived Glory, then went in to read some other things. I made some dirty comments, and people responded by saying I have a dirty mind. Finally, I’ve found a story that is very dirty! With how Ash progressed from Mallow to Lana, and Lillie clearly having a crush on Ash in the anime, I can’t imagine what kinky shit will go down between Ash and Lillie, or what will happen when Gladion finds out. And I really hope there is an orgy in store for chapter 4 |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/8 I love the story, but why even bother having kiawes name come up if he's never In the story |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/15/2019 Wtf just happened |
| tsun chapter 4 . 11/15/2019 Nice lemonades. |
| FinalKingdomHearts chapter 4 . 9/5/2019 I lost interest the moment Ash was tied up. |
| SEAN LEWIS chapter 2 . 6/1/2019 HEY BUDDY EPISILLI0N CHA0US YOUR STORY TOTALLY IS SIMPLY SUPERB AND IS ROCKIN' TOTALLY LOVED IT AND YOU BALANCED THE WHOLE STORY BY MAKING ALL CHAPTERS LARGE BUT AMOUNT OF CHAPTERS LESS IN NUMBER TOTALLY LOVED YOUR STORY PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE IF YOU GET THE TIME THANKS!(YOUR 1 AND ONLY TRUE BUDDY SEAN LEWIS) |
| If u dunt liek me go KYS chapter 1 . 4/25/2019 welp, my childhood is ruined now. |
| HunterQwon chapter 4 . 3/16/2019 Hot |
| Im The Person chapter 2 . 2/22/2019 I know why you had Lana do anaL sex |
| skatemanmysteryz chapter 1 . 2/21/2019 kill yourself lillie fan |
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/20/2019 Make more Please! |
| jbadillodavila chapter 2 . 1/8/2019 Genial. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/11/2018 Sorry I didn't finish my last text as I was saying before I wanted to post that review I know Selena will have a wonderful time with ash and the other Aloha girls |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/11/2018 Can you do ash x Mallow Lille x Lana x moon(Selene) fanfic I thought having Selene (the main protagonist from the Pokemon Sun and Moon games) will feel more complete if she's added even though she's from Kanto like ash but she also has that Aloha vibe around her and I think she would be a great addition to ashs hearm here that he has with the Aloha girls and she's never been in a hearm with ash before and she has very little stories where he and her are in the same story and I can see her getting along with ash and the others very well and get to know each other better and like how ash had one on one with Lille Mallow and Lana before doing it as a group selene and ash can have one on one time as well I know Selene wi |
| Just Call Me Looney chapter 4 . 11/19/2018 I take my last review back: THIS is my favorite chapter. Finally, Ash isn’t clueless when it comes to girls. It’s a good thing those girls trust Ash and knows all too well. Your lemon fanfic is really dope. Excellent job. I hope to read a sequel — one involving the guys and their take on them, the girls fighting over Ash, even having a competition to see who is his favorite. But that’s your decision. Great job again with the fanfic. Stay tuned. |
