Reviews for The Day After
Guest chapter 2 . 8/24/2018
Lovely to catch up on my favourite survivors. Snape deserved to live,
sarahsezlove chapter 2 . 8/24/2018
Beautifully done.
Saint Snape chapter 2 . 8/23/2018
Love it!
Ducky1776 chapter 2 . 8/23/2018
OH WOW!
Sapphire chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
Great, can't wait for another of your stories!
sarahsezlove chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
A perfect way to start my Sunday morning, I am so looking forward to more.
Nagilover4ever chapter 1 . 5/4/2018
Love it. Update soon.
Ducky1776 chapter 1 . 5/4/2018
Awesome! I love the different aspects of the story. It's time to heal. I agree - don't stop here!
darrelldeam chapter 1 . 5/4/2018
Wow, nicely done!
YenGirl chapter 1 . 5/4/2018
How lovely! A compelling and gentle read despite the grief. Welcome back. Thank you for your treatment of Severus and Draco :)
badgerlady chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
Oh, yes, more, please. This is too excellent a start not to be continued.

One niggle: Harry "lies" on his bed. He doesn't "lay" on it (in the present tense) and nor do Poppy or Arthur, unless they're extruding eggs from their bodies. "Lay" is properly used of a person in the past tense (as in "his son lay"); in the present, it can only be used for an object, as in "he lays the book on the table." Sorry to run on so, but you're too good a writer not to get that common confusion straightened out. Besides, I'm a retired copy editor with too much time on my hands; I have to torture *someone*.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
That was a good start
emily4498 chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
this is beautiful