continue please. this story is good

Just started reading it and I already like it I hope you make a new chapter can't wait for the next update.

Interesting

Good job. I’m loving the story as of now. I can’t wait for more

Surprised Ozpin trusts him so quickly. Also, I'm with you on the Vic Mignogna situation. Total BS.

great story I love it and I'm with u
#istandwithvic

Neat

Great chapter

Maybe not so much as a solo but a reserve, if that makes sense. Kind of like an alternate for teams if they need one. That way he can have plenty of interaction with the rest of the characters and stuff.

Amazing story and i say make natsu a solo

Team of 5 with either JNPR or his sisters one would be good cause he's Pyrrha's friend and the other for massive awkwardness

Have Natsu go solo.

More chapters really good

Put natsu in a solo! And keep it up

Okay...soo...I can see where this is going (kinda), the plot is fine with me. But I only have one problem...your writing style...I mean, no offense, but when I read your story, most, if not, all of your sentences need some...refining.
I'll point it out for ya. The names. I can see a couple of times where you made a mistake with the names. And that itself is a big blow. For example, instead of Natsu you wrote natsu. For some people it won't matter, but to others its kinda disturbing. Then there's the fact that you skip...let me explain. Instead of us reading Natsu helping out Ruby against Torchwick, we get a one-sided fight that is only 1 or two sentences long. I mean is THAT even a fight scene? Then there's another thing that bothers me. If I think of timeskips or a change of POV I prefer it BOLD, but yours? Its the plain old text, something that is pretty stupid, especially since authors have the option to pick BOLD when they write or edit in this site. But there is also another one! When I read a first person story I expect the OC/MC to say "I" whenever he says or thinks something, but what do I get from yours? "I" and "He"...its very confusing. I mean, how do we even read your story without getting cross-eyed? I mean its fine if its another character's POV. But "I" and "He" which YOU use in the MC's POV? That's just something that a lot of...people will complain about. It might not be now, but soon, it will be a target of damn flamers. Me? I'm a flamer, but I'm a helpful flamer. Burning you and lighting your way, this is FIRE, signing out