Fucking hell, your random jumping thought crap is like trying to read something written by a schizophrenic.

well nice chapter

aeryn and john are damn stubborn.
Also a little inconsistence with the SG universe about planets.
You said most of them are deserts, when they are supposed pine tree forest in the serie.

uh oh looks like Cams fears became true. anyway great chapter

It would be pretty cool if SG members could be introduced to Moya in the flesh eventually.

Any quest given by Noranti is bound to at least be a little weird.

Awesome story so far hope you continue please
Great writing

I enjoy this story. I hope to read an update soon.

An interesting theme with sophisticated applications, but only for those who have a solid grasp on intangible concepts and possibilities. Wit and subtly are most appreciated by those who understand ambiguity, while leaving readers incapable of such things with mere confusion, frustration, and headaches. ~ KNS

Interesting idea, horrible writing - it literally makes my head hurt.
Not worth the effort.

John would be that stubborn.

Interesting so far. Keep up the good work.

Well a small progress is still progress. nice chapter

I think Vala is very true to the character.

I like this crossover idea.

Keep it up.

Well looks like someone has a better contact then others, nice chapter