Nice looking forward to this story being updated

I really hope you decide to continue this series. it is by far the best written and well thought out fanfictions I've ever read for this type of crossover.

great fanfic.

so lex having any of it is pointless to the plot

don't know what the point of that was, gods don't have DNA. ichor is the blood of Greek gods, not the gods equivalent to mortal blood

I'm really glad you made it clear that their aggression was boosted by outside forces, cause that was definitely throwing me off.

This story is so good I love how you mixed both universes and I cant wait for more chapters and see how percy gets raven.

I love your fanfic, but the religious jab was uncalled for.

This was a great read and I can't wait to see where you go with it! The crossover elements are interesting (though your AU to PJ is dark [Annabeth noo!], it hasn't turned the story into an angsty mess, so props on writing that well!). It's also pretty easy to follow for someone who doesn't know much about the DC universe besides the character names..

The only criticism I have really is about the actual typing of this story, rather than the writing or plot; there are quite a few spelling or grammar mistakes, missing punctuation (such as missing or unnecessary quotation marks) and even an odd few places where random parts of sentences are capitalised.

I usually just nope out of fics with typos or spelling mistakes buuut.. man, I could not resist your plot! Every time I think I'll stop something happens that I just have to read about.. such as the trips to the Amazons or Atlantis. I know it sounds nitpicky, but some people would drop a fic because of it, and honestly this needs more attention! Probably the best written PJ-crossover when it comes to plot and characters.. That being said, if you don't want to bother with technical aspects and focus on the story, I'll gladly look over anything you write with regards to spelling, grammar and typos.

Anywho, that being said, great fic with a great story! I am now off to peruse your profile in search of other such interesting works as this.

Really like the fic! Hope it continues in the future

can you make another chapter

Man I hope this story will continue. Percy unlocking his godly form and fighting Trigon would be cool

This story has a fair amount of issues, but by and large it's been a very enjoyable experience.

However, this chapter took things in an odd direction. Why ignore the strategy from the show, infiltrating using disguises. Especially when the choice you went with is so idiotic that I honestly hesitate to keep reading.

Making the whole world hate Percy. Having him act insane and locking him up as a criminal.

What about when the mission is over? Is the League supposed to go, jk bros, it was a prank! We know the world hates him and think he's a deranged murderer, but like he's not okay?

I can see that the story is pretty much dead in a few chapters, but for all intents and purposes it's dead at chapter 16.

I hope you update soon.

Mrs O’Leary!