Reviews for Above All Shadows
Literary Consumer chapter 45 . 8h
I can’t believe you killed Thor. And poor Loki man. I’m actually crying atm.

Really brilliant story. I really enjoyed it
Thoth chapter 45 . 8/15
Why. did. you. kill. Thor.

And proceeds to end the story.

Like, please.

For Loki's sake.

Ressurect him.
GarnetMonsoon chapter 45 . 7/19
I've got mixed feelings.

Your writing was engaging, high-quality. Your plot was well thought-out, executed amazingly.

But I gotta be honest, I'm pretty disappointed in this ending. The whole reason I look for fix-it fics is because I was unsatisfied with the deaths of IW and EG. I mean, isn't that the reason we read and write them?

But here we are, the brothers separated anyway, one of them dead. Kind of feels a little too hollow, and like not much was really accomplished in terms of the characters that we see. Sure, in the Marvel Universe of this story, tons of people were spared. But those are all faceless people that we, the readers (and watchers) don't really know or care about. The ones I DID care about - Loki and Thor - ended up unhappy. Honestly, it doesn't seem like much was fixed at all.

And I get that it was for Loki's character development, that you probably meant for it to be tragic. But if I had known that this would be the outcome, I wouldn't have read it.

And I hate that, because your writing was really good, and I enjoyed reading it up until those last three chapters.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5
Wow, Loki forgot Thor real fast.
kellyhorse chapter 1 . 1/25
I didn’t want to leave a review since I didn’t have much to say, but after seeing the criminally low number you’ve got, compared to the number of followers/favorites and how good this story is, I feel like I have to...
Very good story. Very good. I think you do well with “showing” not “telling”. This was a little more... not ‘au’, but maybe ‘not canon’? I don’t know- it was a lot different than what happened in infinity war/endgame, which is most certainly absolutely fine, and kudos to you because that takes a lot more imagination (the whole thing with the time on the asteroid? Shoot, big undertaking, creating all that), but it wasn’t nearly as similar to other fics or what I would have expected. Which isn’t a bad thing by any means- again, kudos for being creative- it’s just different, so that was kind of neat. I do appreciate how you killed off a lot of “stars”. Adds a sense of reality to it, when not everyone walks away all untouched (something real marvel plots completely lack). And, while it is a bit sad that Loki now has neither Nebula nor Thor as companions, I think it was a good decision and makes us feel all the more sorry for him, boy, his life sucks. Loved the scene persuading Gamora to join their side. That was really believable. Also liked the slow build with Nebula. Actually, every time Loki and them met people, it was a slow build, and not an immediate trusting whatever. Again, believable and well done.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/19/2019
council, really? that tired old naruto cliche. lol
Chickiri chapter 45 . 8/20/2019
I really really liked this story! I read it... well, not in record time, but close (when I should have been doing my homework ').
The adventures, the way Loki acts, the different characters you wrote (like Nebula and the Walkyrie, I'm a fangirl of these two now)... well, the story in itself, I really liked it. It's like they are all alive :)
(Well, not Thor, obviously, not anymore. Sad me)
Anyway, thank you for this fic! And good luck for what's yet to come
stylo1 chapter 7 . 8/19/2019
i find nothing more enoying than a time travel fic that makes even more problems then the originals had to deal with. a time line that doesnt want to change so to speak
stylo1 chapter 2 . 8/19/2019
you use single quotation marks where most use doubles, it makes for a strange read if you're used to it
stylo1 chapter 2 . 8/19/2019
he and his mother had spend so many days in the privy of her personal library.

does privy means private? yes but written like this it could just aswell mean toilet. so privacy wouldve been a far better word
lameduck987 chapter 30 . 8/17/2019
F this and F you not reading this gay ass shit wtf loki isn't gay you faggot waste of my effing time
Redery chapter 28 . 8/17/2019
Why didn't he think of Heimdal in the first place and can Heimdal even teleport ppl from one location to another without first bringing them to himself? He connects the bridge never seen him make it parallel without being in between
lameduck987 chapter 24 . 8/16/2019
How did she just stab the greatest warrior in the galaxy? Isn't gamorra supposed to be like thanos most skilled child and best assassin
lameduck987 chapter 13 . 8/15/2019
Why does Baugi not tell that hes loyal to asgard and trying to free his brother
lameduck987 chapter 9 . 8/14/2019
Nothing has ever said that Asgard ISN'T a dictatorship. We've never seen a council before or these advisers, what is this BS?
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