| Reviews for Pretty girl |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 8/31/2019 The beginning of the story is really good I hope nothing happens to Fitz and it's a good story I'm waiting for more |
 itsanewworld chapter 6 . 7/8/2019 Please update, it's been ages x |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/9/2019 Please update...great story! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/23/2018 I hope more to come |
| LadyMDSmalls chapter 6 . 8/8/2018 Love this story! Please update soon. |
| Bujuman chapter 4 . 7/21/2018 where did Stephen know Big Gerry from? |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2018 Update please |
| Laurenaustin4 chapter 6 . 7/15/2018 Can not wait for the next update |
| Obsessive reader 7 chapter 6 . 7/15/2018 Very cute story! |
| flacagonzales chapter 6 . 7/15/2018 Great update |
| crabapplect chapter 6 . 7/9/2018 This was so emotional im a navy wife of 30 years, I know the feeling of being left behind to wait for their safe return. Knowing Big Gerry he will probably still try and get Olivia to leave Fitz. Its his father hsving him flying top flyer, he said first year dont fly top fly so that sound like a big gerry thing. Until next chapter |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/5/2018 Oh I feel so sorry for Olivia I hope fittz comes home soon and I hope the story continues and I hope Olivia is pregnant you know she didn't use any protection and I hope the grant family and her especially Fitz's father will accept her I'm waiting for more I hope I get it soon thank you |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/4/2018 What the hell is Command up to? Is he Olivia's uncle perhaps? That comment about being a top flyer came out of nowhere. It could've been made to calm Olivia's fears, but Fitz was taken by surprise. Wonder if Big Gerry has something to do with this. Maybe we'll find out more information from Fitz's letters. Love that Olitz have exchanged verbal confirmation of their love. They've become very attached in the week they had together. Looks like Olivia will have Kenzie and Grace in her life. This will be good for her, bonding with her new family. A sister and a more stable mother figure who isn't using her. Olivia's right though about actions speaking louder than words. I couldn't believe her mother showing up looking for money, especially after groceries were delivered. It was clear they aren't close and that was the only reason for her visit. Quite sad. It would seem that Olitz completely forgot about the morning after pill. They were so wrapped up in each other that it slipped their minds. Maybe they'll dodge a bullet this time. Thanks for this quick update. |
| Cleo chapter 6 . 7/3/2018 I bet BJ talk to command and had him put Fitz in a dangerous mission cuz he married Liv. I pray that Fitz make it out alive and him and Liv could live happily ever after. I’m glad Fitz saw fit to take care of Liv cuz I believe she’s pregnant. She said something about a morning pill but I can’t remember if she took one or not. And BJ is still the racist piece of shit he’s always been. |
| tstormva chapter 1 . 7/3/2018 What's up with all of the """"""""""""""""""""""""""? |
