Reviews for Second First Lady
lajoyce493 chapter 2 . 2/21
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sherrie65 chapter 2 . 6/7/2019
First the title was a great idea, secondly I hope you at least update, so we can know if they have a boy or girl
adri117 chapter 1 . 1/8/2019
beautiful and so sweet! the great love is so delicate like a feather!
mzlizbiz100 chapter 2 . 9/15/2018
Great two shot. Loved this glimpse into Olitz married and family happiness.
realread chapter 2 . 7/6/2018
Wow, look at Liv expressing her feelings and encouraging others to communicate ;) Little Jazzy is absolutely adorable!
OliviaLovesFitz8 chapter 2 . 7/2/2018
Extremely melted by the story! I cannot wait to read more.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2018
OMG, that was so good. I want to believe that that's their life in Vermont post White House and Washington, DC. Married, with two kids and Karen and Teddy making their lives complete.
kelleekellkell chapter 2 . 6/30/2018
Beautiful. Loved the exchange between Olivia and Karen.
Tamarral chapter 2 . 6/29/2018
Love this story and chapter
Coralsue3 chapter 2 . 6/28/2018
This was so beautifully written! A perfect summer story. I love Liv and Karen’s relationship. I’m glad they talked about Jerry so much. I love Jasmine and that Liv is pregnant again. Thanks so much!
Sues52 chapter 2 . 6/28/2018
Love this so much! What a great summer story! I love reading about their family, the acknowledgement of the rock Fitz has usually been & the love they have for each other. Thank you!
IAMASCANDALLOVER chapter 2 . 6/28/2018
BEAUTIFUL...SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...if ever there were secrets that should have come out in the open except for how and why Teddy was conceived this is it...Love how Karen has come around and another baby..yeah...Ebony Beach...please give us more...
Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2018
Ebonybeach you are such a special writer,you really know how to touch your readers heart.
loveoverpride chapter 2 . 6/28/2018
This was great! Just thought of them being happy in Vermont, having a family, and connecting with Karen. So perfect. Thank you for participating. :)
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