I love this book so much! I could totally imagine this being a movie. When we got to the last chapter, I screamed because I was so upset. You are a very talented author! I would love if you could continue with the story, once you get the chance. Good job!

I love this story! Can’t wait to read how you incorporate them knowing peter’s identity into the plot!

So gooddddd! Keep going I can’t wait to see how this ends!

Omgggg this fic is so good. The characterizations are phenomenal and I enjoy reading it sooo much! Please write more I can hardly wait!

Hi! I just wanted to say that I've finally taken the time to catch up on this story and I really enjoyed it! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

I just read a comment of somebody pointing out that they think Peter is too weak in this story, and I dunno but that just really bothered me, the way they told their opinion. I mean, it’s fine to have your own opinion on something, but flat out telling them in such a rude way really annoys me. It’s not advice or criticism to help you improve, it’s just flat out rudeness. Instead of saying, “for ffs, his character is always written so weak, blah blah blah,” they could’ve actually said it nicer and given you advice, or just said it in a way that doesn’t come off as hate. I wonder why they bother commenting when all they have to announce is their hatred for the way a character is written. Really bothers me.

I'm so fucking tired of seeing Spider-Man being beaten so easily. In 80% of the fics here or on Ao3 the kid is depicted as a wounded puppy with PTSD, he loses pretty much every fight and is incapable of dodging bullets or knives.

Give him some credit ffs, the guy is stronger, faster and sturdier than Cap. Add his spider sense and you got yourself someone who should be able to take on multiple superhumans. Extremis makes it very, very difficuilt for Peter to take them out since he aims to incapacitate rather than kill ( and they're super hot/and can basically heal from everything) but at least have him last longer than two-three hits. He's not some helpless kid, no matter his inexperience.

I'm so excited to see how you wrap this fic up! Your characterization of Peter and Tony are amazing on point and your writing is great! I actually love this fic so much its probably one of my faves if not my favorite.

This is great! Can’t wait to see how it ends! Keep up the awesome work!

This story is just... Wow. I don't even know what to say. It's absolutely amazing. There is something different and unique about it so far that sets it apart from other fanfics that I have read, and I am absolutely obsessed. Your writing is phenomenal and I feel that you've captured the characters perfectly. I love the suspense, and I can imagine each scene clearly in my head. Incredible job, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

This is so DAMN good. I’m so anxious to see what’s gonna happen next. Update soon!

This was literally so sweet. This whole fan fic is everything I need it to be. Thank you for this masterpiece, I am really enjoying it so far. You captured the characters so well. I swear I can hear Robert Downey Jr. and Tom Holland reciting these lines! Well done!

Loved the chapter and very well done. Keep up the good work and update soon please and thank you.

Is Pepper, Happy of Rhrodey going to be there? Someone they can trust and help them? What about Maria Hill? I thought she went to work with them for sometime? Ex Shield agent.

Another good chapter! Liked the setup for the final few chapters. Enjoyed it when Tony taught Peter to drive for the first time. Good that they've managed to get ready without incident. Happy that Peter got the chance to talk to May, glad she's having fun on her trip, hope things will be alright when she gets back. Not liking that Tony's using himself as bait. Hope he and Peter will be alright, though it doesn't seem likely for things to go to plan given that Jessica and Arthur know Spider-Man's identity.

Good chapter! Looking forward to the next one!