Reviews for An Archangel's Vengeance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() More please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this |
![]() ![]() ![]() i understand what your trying to do but this chapter sucks to be blunt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay, that's s very open beginning - there's so many ways this could go. I'm very much curious to see it all play out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Figures Harry wouldn't even be able to get a spell off in retaliation...when he survives he needs to learn to not go down without a fight. Of course, sounds like Dudley is bound for Ceberus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far so good...and maybe the Dursleys will fuck with Aria next... Instant revenge! I can definitely see the Dursleys moving to Omega to get away from the law only to annoy Aria. Also, something tells me that Dumbles will have a hell of a job finding Harry now. Maybe Fawkes could...maybe. The blood wards should have collapsed by now. The only thing I am not looking forward to is Harry losing his memory. I hope the only part he forgets is who he is and where he came from, NOT any knowledge of his spells etc. Otherwise he would be no better than a common lost child. Which would make surviving on Omega almost impossible, especially for someone who has no idea of the galaxy and how it runs. Plus a HP story without magic is no HP story. Anyway...for now...looking forward to whatever happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue the story its good so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting so far, hoping Dudley gets his! |
![]() ![]() I’m intrigued, please keep it going! |
![]() ![]() I love the idea, it's so original! Looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() good start |