Reviews for The Betrothal That Wasn't
Guest chapter 25 . 5/1
This story would be better if take place in high school in the normal world
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2
I love you so much for giving this beautiful fic..it almost looks sequel or continuation to the kkm anime or novel.. really worth making anime..
Guest chapter 27 . 2/8
Wowww I cried for the first time .. Awesome fic ever..
gdzwolfram chapter 27 . 7/6/2019
I just want you to know I enjoyed the story.. may you continue to write more..
RedMoonGuy chapter 2 . 7/2/2019
You are totally excused for the cliffhanger... things are starting to look interesting...
I like the insights you provide into the characters through their unspoken actions... though I surely can't help noticing your penchant for giving florid descriptions of the attires of each of the characters!

And, cummon! U don't have to own KKM... U are creating a better version of it...

Thanks for the efforts u put in...
RedMoonGuy chapter 1 . 7/2/2019
It so happened that I was introduced to KKM by a very dear friend very recently... and browsing around the fanfics I chanced upon your story... and before I even knew, I was so engrossed into your storyline that often I would start relating and searching for characters u created in the original series...

So rest assured, u r not late... Even more than a year after ur story showed up, here are those of us who are still eagerly searching for KKM fanfics... And u surely didn't disappoint...

Highly recommended read...

P.S. sorry for the long review
Guest chapter 23 . 4/6/2019
I just love every page! I so wish you took over for season 4 of Kyo Kara Moah! They should use this story exactly!
hotxhotguy chapter 22 . 3/26/2019
Sorry but this chapter is not believable. How on Earth Shinou is letting the council walking all over a Maou. Why Yuri grow a backbone and tell those old hags to stuff it? We need more monarch Yuri.
Guest chapter 26 . 11/2/2018
I loved it
Guest chapter 26 . 10/23/2018
I loved the fic and the ending was pretty good! It was Yuuram! Epilogue please!
Guest chapter 25 . 10/19/2018
The wedding of Yuuri and Wolfram? I hope so, Because I can not believe that Yuuri follows the orders of the nobles.
Guest chapter 25 . 10/14/2018
Ok great story can only hope for a happy ending for Wolfram and Yur
Guest chapter 24 . 10/1/2018
Beautiful poem! thank you!
"Teach me how to live without my heart..." I love it!
Definitely excellent fic.
Guest chapter 23 . 9/26/2018
If the writer decides that the story ends, there is no problem because he is the only one who knows the exact moment when it should happen. BUT PLEASE DO NOT DISAPPEAR , keep writing kkm 's fics as fantastic as this one.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
Looking forward to the next update!
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