I really liked this story. I always got this kind of vibe between Hikage and Yomi, even if Ikaruga and Katsu are their counterparts, respectively. Nothing wrong with some in-team relationships, right? I also thought that Haruka’s remark to Mirai was hilarious, and the mention of Homura wanting her own room for her and Asuka was funny too.
Both Hikage and Yomi seemed in character, even if it didn’t really SOUND like Senran Kagura, it was close enough to sound Iike a side story that could have been in Deep Crimson before the crazy stuff from that game started up.
Overall, this was good and a perfect length, nice, simple and fun to read. Good job.
Cheers...

I've seen the interactions between the two. Actually, I have thought about pairing these two, but my true OTP is Ikaruga x Yomi. But this is good~! Like wow! This is very well written! You did very well with this! I'm impressed! Hope to see what happens next~!