You did really well here.

Ahh, it's about time I saw an update.

Great to see this story again

Since this version is set on Berk, I'm interested in seeing where you take things.

Oh Stoick better not be thinking on taking Hiccup with him to the Dragon Nest. Hiccup would sooner sabotage the boats and make them crash into the rocks before he lets them get to the nest.

Dude, your story was published just 3 days ago. Getting reviews takes time. I mean my first story was published last year and I still have, like, 23 reviews.

And I have an interesting idea but I don't want to put it in this review because if you do my idea then someone who reads the reviews will have already known it.

Count Dooku: Whispering Death or the Skrill

Ahsoka Tano: Deadly Nadder

Anakin: Monstrous Nightmare

Obi-Wan Kenobi: Thunderdrum

Mace Windu: Gronckle or the Skrill

Barriss Offee: Zippleback or Changewing