I can't wait till Ruby and Yang are in school with how this is rolling

Fun read, and i hope you do come back to this. Your OC reads well, and everything is pretty well written. However, I do think the pace is sort of slow and based around too many jaw dropping reveal moments. If you come back to this, maybe tone back on those.

Anyway, thanks for writing.

There's actually a gun spear in bloodborne, which is close enough to a scythe to the point im not sure the Good Hunters awe is appropriate here. Not a big deal, but thought id point it out.

Hm, i think Summer is being a little unreasonably harsh with Tai.

Also, i think you've forgotten about Zwei.

"...tome of fanfiction mystic hymns in the other." YO I'M DYING! SOMEONE HELP!

Side note: Actually, you know what? Being a Vileblood sounds fucking badass! Imagine not having to wait in line at an amusement park and just sitting in a wheelchair made of your blood. Fuck a public reaction from slitting my throat (edgy), I ain't trying to have sore feet trying to wait 2 hours for a ride that last 1 minute. You got me all the way fucked up lmao.

That said, hope you're doing well in life. I know shit gets rough, but you'll pull through big fella :). Thanks for the cool fic you've made, and I hope you can continue it when you have the time!

Oh wow! I'm actually glad you made Cadfan's body weak :D! It would make a lot of sense for his new body to not be able to withstand it going above the limits of a regular hunter, even less of God, especially when it was literally born some hours ago lmao.

By the Gods... Please no... Not human interaction! ANYTHING BUT HUMAN INTERACTION!

Cadfan mourning the death of the Great Ones by his hands automatically made me like his character very much. I enjoy OC's that aren't willfully bloodthirsty when it comes to stories like these, and so far Cadfan seems like a very interesting character! I wonder if he'll be able beat omega lad Sibyll, though ;)...

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Is this story deaddon’t die being dead is bad

More!

I find it funny how SALEM of all people is talking about arrogance. Heh, she is waaaay too confident in her own abilities.

I read your story and I am immediately hook, I love the way you make your oc character. He has weak and strong points. I like the journal entries, its add a nice touch to this Fanfiction. I can help you out with this Fanfiction since you are struck. I am currently working on a Fanfiction as of now, but I have time to help you out if you want that help. I love this Fanfiction, very good plot, I like the setting of the Fanfiction. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep on writing.

glad I found this, it was a fun read. Thanks for Writing!

Interesting indeed this is.