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Great trilogy! Thank you so much for writing it... I loved the characters and the setting it was really fun and well written...
The irony though of Luna becoming Talzin only to die before her foes.

Good work all three of your stories were brilliant with a ton of unexpected plots. Luna as mother Talzin was a completely unexpected outcome but one that you pulled off. I wonder what Yoda would have thoughts about what she would have become. Diabolis was a brilliant Sith and the battle between him and Veneficus was epic.

Man, you are awesome. Thank you for these great stories and a nice ending.

Let me put it this way: A Light Side victory ending for a Dark Side story is EXCEEDINGLY hard to pull off in a satisfactory manner, and you fell short. Hard.

It feels as though you're so angry at Disney wrecking the old Legends canon (which is fair) that you vented your anger at this story by making sure EVERYTHING sticks to SW canon in the end (which is anything but, considering this is a fanfic and one that clearly didn't stick to HP canon to boot).

At least it killed a few days' worth of free time while I was waiting for other fics to pick up the slack and update, so thanks I guess?

is it over?

wow thus the story end in a full circle back to the canon... Great job and i love the story.

ah i had a feeling luna was still alive xD

Holy cow. I cant believe it's over. I knew it would end eventually, but I'm really sad to see the epilogue to the story of Veneficus. For a second it seemed like you were going to reincarnated him to rule after Sidious took over, but I guess not. Anyway, great work.

great chapter keep it up and I very much enjoyed the characters in the story both main and side. thanks

An excellent story, very well done.
I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading your next piece.
Keep up the excellent work!

I hope he gets reincarnated by the power of the force in some kind of unified being and gets revenge on Talzin in part 3... Somehow stealing the force from the Vong planet. Hmmm.

truly excellent work

Great story, some awesome ideas (like with origin of Talzin), satisfying ending and progress in enjoyability of the writing in the second half of the trilogy (especially the drop in frequency of using the words "brilliant" and "illustrious" lol)

Thank you for the Story :D