A hispanic little girl slapped Rita in the face

"That's what you get for hurting Lincoln"

I like this story and I hope you have Ronnie realize that she was acting like an jackass to Lincoln so try's to apologize but fail because what she did to him is unforgivable and has to live with it the rest of her life.

Can Lucy earn his trust back again?

You are improving grammar wise, but you still have some way to go. This was at least easier to understand than the previous version.

After my review of your previous draft, "Getting Stuff Back the Hard Way", you already explained to me why Rita and Lynn Sr. are so OOC compared to the show, but it remains hard to picture them like this. And it doesn't explain Ronnie Anne, who is also very OOC compared to her shows counterpart. Yes, she teased him at first, but to get his attention.

Rita will have a lot to explain once C.P.S. comes calling. And now that her daughters know the truth, I wonder how many of them will turn their back on her, even if her love for them is genuine.

What is Rita's deal with her hatred of Lincoln?