What the shit Dumbledorrrrrrr

idk, i like the first one better.

Love that quote "B*tch, dont test me! I have a fork and f*cking Cloud flames. I can show you exactly why the quarto used a bloody fork of all things as his preferred weapon." I laughed my arse off, it's so funny!

I wonder what would happen if Harry tried to bake with stevia or some other non sugar sweetener...

Only on the second chapter of this rewrite and I already am enjoying the changes from the original. Not to say that I didn’t enjoy the original story. Anyway, can’t wait to see how the rest has changed. I’ve been wondering since the original story how Harry being the Cloud varia and a Sky might effect things with his guardians. Bye for now and thanks for continuing this story and sharing it with us.

(Internal screaming)

Oof, the cannon fodder tho XP

This... I liked the other one better... but I’m willing to give this one a shot... though... it’s going extremely fast, and some of it doesn’t make sense... I’ll try to Endure it

wow

Hmm... Interesting. But, I did hope Harry make his own famiglia. At Least, Freelance, Independent, Neutral Famiglia.

I mean, like Arcobaleno. Famiglia, but not famiglia. Arcobaleno was Founded by Seven Strongest.

But, Harry's, be founded by Ex-Wizard with all round specialty. Like Harry, he is a cook, a Chef. Neville, a gardener or maybe, poisonous, rare but not too illegal plants. Draco, a healer or maybe someone who make special medicine, like potioner. Luna, Fortune Telling, or perhaps, someone who deal with animals (?). The Twins, special weapon maker, or still pranks joke shop, but more vicious.

Like Arcobaleno, Harry's or his guardians can take any clients whoever they want. only, they're more tight knit little community (if any wizard beside them who want new life and had flames) or little organization.

So, if Harry's friends (Varia) want Harry to be their temporary Cloud Guardians (For Battle Rings) who he to denies his friends.

But again, Harry still Cloud, he very much love his freedom. after all, his territory are his and his friends freedom.

A Sky can only be a Sky, they're unique that way, no "cloudy" business possible, otherwise their uniqueness vanishes and they just become boring. Manipulative Dumbledore is just boring to read since everyone writes him the same. And most importantly, while your own gender journey might be interesting, reading about someone else's feels like a waste of time. P.s. Sassy character, and a Bitch character are different things, yet most people can't see the difference, which is sad.

what an interesting/exciting chapter! good job on researching the meanings behind the names for Luna and Co. the only thing that bothers me is that i cant even begin to pronounce most of them. and my 44-ish mind keeps reading Nevile's as Lik-m-aid (the Fun Dip candy)lol

This chapter was funny

thank you, I really needed the laugh. it was the funniest thing I've read in a while. keep up the good work.

When Harry finds out who it was that landed him getting cursed indirectly, I have a feeling that he'll march straight to Hogwarts and attempt to burn down his portrait.