Reviews for Perfect Pandemonium
Guest chapter 19 . 6/15
Having Tony claim barely knowing Peter is probably the best way you could have handled it. Although my heart really wanted Tony to break down a little and admit that yes it was personal, but not because of any enhancement, just because he's unwittingly and unwillingly come to care about Peter after working with him during his internship. ( And, er, how did you explain Tony being Peter's medical advocate? That sorry of just disappeared.)

Anyway, this had been a good ride, but I'm pretty disappointed that this is the end. I'm sure you have a ton of readers who would be grateful if you picked this back up, becauae what you do have is pretty good.
Bookbugg chapter 16 . 9/12/2019
"Marie Faust. Park ranger, single mother of three cats, enjoyed hiking and archery, author of The Independent State of Dade: Social Memory and False Narratives in a Microcosm of the Lost Cause."

That a real book by ya?
Estel Ashlee Snape chapter 19 . 7/15/2019
Good chapter. Hopefully the other delegates put Ross in his place. Keep up the good work!
~Estel
tyry95 chapter 2 . 7/14/2019
Very well written, but not a fan of hurt/comfort being the whole plot. Not sure where it'll go though
princess-rey-tano chapter 19 . 7/13/2019
Loved it!
Krakengirl chapter 19 . 7/13/2019
Awesome chapter and I thought Tony’s speech was fabulous!
Estel Ashlee Snape chapter 18 . 7/7/2019
Good couple of chapters. Hopefully physical therapy will help him out. Keep up the good work!
~Estel
Krakengirl chapter 18 . 7/5/2019
Amazing as always! Super excited about the update! Poor Peter but I really liked how you portrayed his struggle of returning as Spider-Man. And Ned is such a good friend
princess-rey-tano chapter 18 . 7/2/2019
I saw Far From Home earlier today and then I read this right after…both excellent experiences that made me cry!
cargumentluv chapter 17 . 6/21/2019
I’m finally caught up on this and wanted to drop a quick note to say I’m still here and lovin’ this. There where so many spots here and there that really stuck out to me. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter and when you figure out what the note from tony said I’m curious too lol.
Krakengirl chapter 17 . 6/14/2019
All I can saw is wow! You are such a talented writer! The spot on depth into the characters, plot/character development, style of writing and the detail/research you put into this fic. Kudos to you and I’m anticipating this story’s direction and next update with my excitement!
bookworm383 chapter 1 . 6/12/2019
Man I know you live in the DMV (“step back doors closing”) lmao. Keep up the good work!
princess-rey-tano chapter 17 . 6/10/2019
I personally always support putting Peter Parker through shit! A little whump never hurt anyone, I'd read the story! Pepper's summary of Civil War in this chapter made me laugh, I loved it!
princess-rey-tano chapter 16 . 6/6/2019
Loved it!
parisindy chapter 16 . 6/5/2019
Wow I am kind of obsessed with this story
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