Great chapter to defentily enjoyed it keep up the good work

Can you have ash bring back some of his old Pokemon from the previous regions he traveled to I know Hilda and the others would definitely be interested in seeing other Pokemon that they never seen before and have ash develop other aura abilities and it would be interesting to see Hilda and ash team up during some of the battles or contests they would do and see some of ashs old rivals and campaigns

Nice chapter

I'm looking forward to next chapter this is looking really interesting and please add more ash x Hilda moments I love to see these two grow very close to each other to the point where they want to become more than friends and I may not know when yet but ash should definitely ask Hilda out on a date when the time is right it makes sense if the boy asks the girl out

You should have ash catch a axew, blitzle, zorua, sawsbuck, beartic, joltik, and a shiny deino.

I'm highly looking forward to seeing how you handle the Ash and Hilda pairing in this. It will be interesting to see how it compares to mine.

I'm curious I know ash is supposed to be smarter in this story but will he be less dense and understand what love is unlike his anime counter part and will ash have any legendary Pokemon joining his team

Good start, looking forward to the next chapter

This chapter is unreadable because of all these text symbols can you please get rid of them and fix this chapter so it will make this story readable again

Seeing how you are new and very likely just posted new Stories on Pokemon fanfiction section will be targeted by a group of egomaniac jerks who preach a twisted idea of how fanfiction should be. St Elmo's Fire is very likely to be this user who will post a review and not care one bit about you're story. They literally do it to everyone and never really follow or read it.

In short they have pissed off much of the active community and are the reason that new stories struggle. They are also not helpful.

In short they would yell that this isn't a real chapter, will say that you're story should be in the anime world tag (despite that not changing a thing, the world tag is basically over looked, there are PMD stories but no PMD tag because yeah the fandom doesn't care), that Pokemon shouldn't be capitalized (which Game Freak has gone on record that you should), yell at you that you're bold and italic completely different from the story author notes would be confused without a pointless line (yes they are that nitpicky), and complain you aren't making correct dialogue, which is bullcrap as Dialogue veries from region to region and publisher to publisher. Oh and God help you if you write things like "Oh my Arceus" because yes they complain about that.

Most likely if you haven't been warned or got the news to block them I predict the next review, or the one after will be of them complain while giving a false pretense that they are helping via a disclaimer they made because so many users tell them to piss off.

I'm afraid to say that something went wrong when you posted the chapter. There's all this weird coding and stuff displayed.