Awww what a sweet ending. You really did a remarkable job for this being on the shorter side of fics. You somehow managed to resolve everything without it even feeling rushed. Which is extra surprising bc as soon as I read that she lost one of her earrings I thought "this gon be a long one." I will say that the way she got it back was a bit convenient if nothing else, but I really can't think of any other way to resolve that conundrum. Other than that, everything else was great, and I really really liked the ending and the little kiss that MariChat shared.

P.S. Congrats to Chloe for being able to hold her tongue and at least sort of play the part of Ladybug, especially since she revealed she was actually terrified at one point.

Guess who's back. Back again.

Okay so I got the notification in my inbox that chapter 2 came out so I decided to go ahead and read chapter 1. Impressed as always. Still good grammar and characterization, and I really liked Marinette's internal dialogue about Chat and how she felt about him. Both when they were sharing Andre's ice cream, and when she realized he would do anything to protect her. (Reminiscent of Treachery if I do say so myself) It was a smart move on her part to separate so he could clear his head and so she could maybe get away and help. Interested to see where you take this!

I have really enjoyed reading this, and I would love for you to continue it if you are willing. Either way, great job!

awww this is so sweet. the end scene is just so warn and give me a fluffly feeling inside. i will never get enough of marichat. i hope in the future they'll learn each other identity (if you dont want to continue this). this is a great story. i enjoy every words you put in this story and can't help but get watery in here and there. thank you for writing this! also, please keep on writing

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I love this story! 3

Amazing! Though I really really wish there was more to this story!

awesome, love it so far and great writing, really hope you continue it cause I'm hooked

A good story, thank you for writing.

Excellent one shot! I kind of hope you, at least, write another chapter that shows how much Chat is the hero she thought he was (and we know he is). He doesn't get enough credit! Especially for working/thinking on his own. Overall, it's great by itself but I would love to see the "end" result too! Thanks for writing!

I'd definitely would want to read what happens! It was really good, very true to the characters too. Loved it.
Just a personal thought though,, hoping you won't mind: I think it's weird that Chat calls Marinette "Princess" so often, it's usually meant as a flirt thingy, and also that he'd make a pun out of it (purr-incess) each time, even in such dire circumstances as in the end...
That being said, I really really liked it, thank you so much for sharing !

That was so lovely and waqrm, especially the end scene, all things considering. Marinette's little speech to Tempest was really deep and touching. My favorite part is Marinette's telling Chat to continue being the hero she knows he is, that shot me dead center in the heart.
'Rain or shine' - she even made a pun.
Fantastic and emotionally-overflowing story. Love to see this continued.

I’m not sure if this is a one shot or not, but I’m loving all that it on have going on. I was a little confused at the beginning because I though Ladybug was hanging out and eating ice cream instead of marinette, but my brain caught up eventually lol

That is a nice start. I hope you write more for it. Thanks for posting.

Please can you add to this! This is so good!