From this point on, every fic should be named after a Nickelback song. This "action" scene was really good. I could feel the intensity of the situation really well.

That was so heartbreaking at the beginning and so sweet at the end. This is so well written and I felt like I was watching Mike talk to El right at her bedside! I just got into this fandom so I'm glad you were the first mileven fanfic I decided to read! This was truly amazing!

I remember reading one other ST fic where Doc Owners (duh!?) 'ran some tests' on El because Karen brought up that nosebleeds are never good. El's powers get stronger and she doesn't bleed / bleeds less in ST2 already but the fact that she gets weak when she does a lot with her powers (as does Kali) certainly doesn't bode well. Your writing is brilliant; George Lucas couldn't write romance scenes for sh** (Phantom Menace) so you can do something he can't!

OMG! Until now I can read this.

This Is so beautiful!

Thank you for using one of my ideas! honestly I thought I was bothering you with my reviews.

Thank you so much! I Love your stories, see you in the next fanfic! bye

Honestly I was freaked out at first about something I can't say here, then I kept on reading knowing I would love it anyway, and I did. And I cried. A lot. As for what you said on the notes, OHHHHH sweetie, I totally agree with you, - I don't want to be right about that - but I too think they'll do something about it.

Hey, so I've been AFK for way too freaking long, but I loved the ending to Geek on Fleek and this story, and I'm looking forward to more. Angst is always welcome. Melancholy moods are fun. Don't know why that is, but it's true: we love watching our favorite characters go through hell.
As long as they're okay in the end.
They'll be okay, right?
Gosh, I'm worried for El and what the show might have in store for her and the rest of the gang.

But we'll deal with that when it gets here. Riggs out.

Bit of a rough read after all the fluff lately, but another great one. I think you are absolutely right that her powers are taking some kind of a toll on her that will have to be addressed at some point.

Wonderful! :') Mike being desperate is so heartwarming, and the way Hopper lets him in on the discussion about "their" options really shows what a great Dad he is. Also glad that you mentioned the nosebleed-thing!

I always wondered about her nose bleeds that she'd get an aneurysm or brain cancer. Hopefully she'll be OK.

THAT. WAS. SO. EMOTIONAL. MY GOSH. You’re so good at both fluff and angst, I love it!

Damn...that was a tough one! I feel like it's totally plausible though. So happy El woke up though!