Please continue

Whether or not I should be angry about a single plagiarized line from a chapter of fanfiction I enjoyed is an ironic thing to consider.

Evil; whether greater, lesser or middling. It's all the same. And if I had to choose between one evil and the next, I'd rather not choose at all.

Nice chapter.

please continue I've reread this a lot and I still love it

Please pick this back up lol

Wonderful!

Oh Falcone. A broken man lead by his pride until the very end.
Damian look like a younger green eyes Bruce, why didn't the notice that?

I really liked this, as a prologue to a longer and deeper story its perfect, only issue is that this is all there is at the moment so I hope there's more to come coz this has all the ingredients of a master piece just waiting to cook

Oh. Me like. Followed.

This is something I have not seen before. I wonder how will it develop.

Please please continue. I love this

very nice story so far and I hope you'll revive and update this soon

There never is a surer way to abandon a story than take a break to work on another after the end of an arc.

This would have made a fantastic story had you continued. Akasha. Shirou has seen the fucking Root. No doubt about it, he's OP. No doubt he and his servants could deal with most threats, nearly every hero and villain, but some I wonder if they can beat. Look at fucking Superman, the worst hero ever. I find him so pathetic. For all his power he wields it pathetically. Batman deserves that power more. He has the brains to support it! Point is it would be hard to compare them to beings of Superman's caliber or others who could wipe out entire planets, even though shirou literally houses the root of ALL CREATION! (Ps he isn't Damien, he is Shirou. SHIROU!)

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