Reviews for Quiet Life With Monster Girls
starscreamer11 chapter 14 . 4/12
Love the story so far but damn the update rates are atrocious from the last update and in chapter comments I really wish I don't have to wait 9 months for an update
Nejoin chapter 1 . 4/11
So getting right into the fic so far I am pleased with your portrayal of Kira. However I am one for nitpicking, getting into "spoiler" territory of Chapter 1 if you will for any who are looking through the reviews. I recommend either just reading the chaoter or skipping this review. one why would outright state near the beginning what had changed with Kira's ability? Something small that didn't quite need to be there due to it being mostly self-explanatory. Then again letting us know does give us an exact insite into the ability, somewhat. I am one for having a reader think about stuff instead of stating it, show instead of tell you know? That said, this shouldn't be a constant rule. Moderation is key afterall.

Next comes from the dragonewt later on, it was described that their gender was ambiguous, but then "she cried out" answered a couple paragraphs later before Kira had even taking off her mask. Perhaps instead it could've been "They cried out, a voice which sounded feminine in tone and pitch, a female perhaps?" Then have Kira do the take her mask off for confirmation.

Anyways those are my nitpics, I hope I didn't ce off as rude but it's something I'm prone to, dissecting stories like these. I once again state Kira has so far been, well being Kira. His inner monologue matches with his speaking patterns. Not a lot of fics manage to keep the characters, in-character.
HeavenDemon29 chapter 14 . 4/9
This story is amazing. Kira is my favorite JoJo villain, and seeing more of him is always a treat. I eagerly await the next chapter.
LeBomb chapter 3 . 4/8
no other stands...PLEASE
CrimsonRev chapter 5 . 1/24
Will there be a Killer Queen Requiem? It would be amusing to see whoever is the leader of this Passione (if it isn't Diavolo) try to fight Kira and then just get GER'd
GrumpyGrue chapter 14 . 1/15
Kira is making friends, but is too tsundere to admit it!...ha ha ha. Just kidding! But it would be a hassle if a worse neighbor moved into Kimihito's spot, right after he made progress getting the lamia to chill out, when pursuing her affections. Noisy nights under the full moon won't be too bad with a bit of preparation, and more soundproofing. That can be done in the home renovation!

Kimihito is a pretty cool guy. But it could be a concussion influencing his lack of self-preservation too. Fight on good neighbor bros! Show those wild liminals what for!

I'm late, but Merry Christmas anyways!
GrumpyGrue chapter 13 . 1/15
Kimihito is a great pal. Centorea is nice too. Mila's cultivation journey has begun. Don't even know what Papi's up to, but maybe she found Kira's girlfriend's hand? Where did it go even? Is it still back in his destroyed house?
GrumpyGrue chapter 12 . 1/15
He can use that tooth for the tooth fairy, and then afford a jawbreaker with the money.
GrumpyGrue chapter 11 . 1/15
Icy what Yoshi did there. He has now killed on both sides of the temperature range, and his range in the kitchen.
GrumpyGrue chapter 10 . 1/15
Things are really heating up.
GrumpyGrue chapter 9 . 1/15
Does he have a jar of nail clippings?
GrumpyGrue chapter 8 . 1/15
The helpful doggirl was cute. Talk to the hand. Potato in Spanish is papa. But if you say it as papi, it's like how hookers call their client daddy. Asdf Die potato. Die papa. Die papi!
GrumpyGrue chapter 7 . 1/15
Kimihito is going to wind up in a lamia burrito. Kira identifying himself as a good guy was interesting. He's a good neighbor, and THOT slayer.
GrumpyGrue chapter 6 . 1/15
Looks like he's about to get handsy.
GrumpyGrue chapter 5 . 1/15
The Passione lady sounds sadistic in a different way than Miss Smith. And HORY SHIET that was an excellent stando faito.
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