Just one complaint...it’s over. Good job! I know how it is trying to write the “perfect” ending. It’s hard and you will never be satisfied and I think it’s because deep down we really don’t want to end it. Good job over all! Look forward to more!

continue this storyline? I would love to see more of Derek and Stiles learning their roles. I also can not wait to see what else you have up your sleeve.

I'm sad to see this end but all that's good must come to an end. I loved this story so much. I kinda wished you had put a tiny bit more of styles going into labor. I cat remember if you put when he went into or not (it's like 1 am when I'm writing this) but I kinda hoped that styles went into labor and Derek being panicked or something. But it was a good story and I loved the ending. You made it to ring right back to the beginning and it was good.

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I'M HAPPY/SAD THE STORY CAME TO AN END. MY BOYS ARE HAPPY TOGETHER *happy crying while eating cookies*

Omg the last chapter was intense and I loved it. I really love the ending to this. I would love a sequel to this eventually.

*CUE THE APPLAUSE* *CUE THE WHOOP-WHOOP SOUNDTRACK* *CUE THE SOUND OF PARTY POPPERS* Melissa, you did just fine. I loved the ending. You did a great job with it. I seriously loved it. And was so sweet

Beautiful ending to a great story.

it was so sweet, thanks for sharing I enjoyed it very much

Can I just say how much I fell in love with story? Enough that I went to your page to see what other stories you had posted? I would venture to say you are a very good writer. Can I also say how sad I was that you announced the next chapter would be the final? Sadness could not describe the emptiness I felt when reading those words. I so looked forward to reading about the parenthood angst of Sterek. But I guess all good things come to an end. Sitting here waiting for the next chapter to post but not really wanting it to post. *sigh*

Loved how you keep certain elements cannon even when they seem hard to figure out how to be cannon. I hope you continue with this universe after all it seems to be getting set up for a series..

I KNEW IT! I KNEW THEO WAS STILL ALIVE AFTER ALL THIS TIME AND YOU TRIED TO GET ME TO LOOK THE OTHER WAY.

So I was right it was him after all, but I never imagine how he was able to get in town, now I hope they will do something about the underground tunnel, and I'm really glad it's finally over now Stiles won't have to look at his back every time, good update thanks

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I FUCKING GODDAMN MOTHERFUCKING KNEW IT. I KNEW THAT FUCKER WAS ALIVE. *grabs my abused newspaper and whacks you over and over again on the head* Seriously, there was no one else I could think of that wanted Stilies as badly as this boy and I was right

I swear, his character is just as annoying as he was on Pretty Little Liars. Only twice as crazy, considering the fact he killed his brother and used his body to fake his own death. The levels of disturbing that is off the charts.

But it's over. Now Stilies can have his baby and take his long, long, long deserved vacation

Wait, I thought you had to kill an alpha to become an alpha?

Why are you doing this to me! My poor little fox cinnamon roll. -huggles Stiles-