Reviews for To Bare His Child |
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HanimeGaming chapter 6 . 3/12 Please make the next chapter soon, I was really enjoying this... It's great, and I want to read more |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/19/2019 Awww, what a place to leave off! I know it's been a while, but this story is very enjoyable, and I want to see all the little details come to light, and find out what happens to Aerith, Sephiroth, and the baby. I hope one day you might pick this story back up. |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/31/2019 Nice story! Poor Aerith, I hope she and the baby will be okay. I wonder how will this affect Sephiroth in the following chapters? |
ThE 4SsAsSiN 21 chapter 6 . 5/25/2019 Good chapter. That there’s someone who is not a SOLDIER and can keep up with Sephiroth is pretty unbelievable, but a good chapter nonetheless. Either way, I’m eager to find out what happens with the child. Also, shouldn’t they know the gender by now? |
ThE 4SsAsSiN 21 chapter 5 . 5/24/2019 I would like to draw some of the scenes you presented in this story, but I’m afraid most of them would involve stick figures. Anyways, it’s a great story you have here. Though I don’t usually like stories with short chapters, you somehow make it fit. There is one issue, however. I noticed that you often forget to include words in a sentence. I can’t still get the gist of what you wanted to get across but I just wanted to let you know. |
3Silmarillion chapter 6 . 1/21/2019 enjoying your story! |
Sheikahstone559 chapter 4 . 8/30/2018 LOVE! Please Continue! :D |
SorrowoftheHeart chapter 4 . 8/17/2018 Sorry for not reviewing sooner. I've been busy and hadn't had time to read the latest chapter until now. Thanks for clearing up that misunderstanding! I can't wait to find out who it was, though. As always, I am eager for the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
megumisakura chapter 3 . 7/28/2018 awesome chapter,love it! |
megumisakura chapter 2 . 7/28/2018 great chapter! |
SorrowoftheHeart chapter 3 . 7/14/2018 Great chapter but there's one thing that bothers me: Hojo mentions he found a way to impregnate someone without intercourse but I remember you writing that Sephiroth did sleep with her or at least someone did. I haven't had a chance to reread just yet, but I was wondering if you were aware of this mistake or if you changed it. Other than that, it's great and I can't wait to see how they interact with just the two of them. |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/27/2018 This could destroy Aerith, given her disposition towards anything involving Shinra. I don't suppose she'll pull something that gives Sephy his emotions back and makes him rebel against the company? |
lemnlime7 chapter 2 . 6/25/2018 This story has a lot of promise and it's really interesting so far. BTW, my first thought when the character Claire appeared was "FF13 crossover"? lol |
SorrowoftheHeart chapter 2 . 6/21/2018 Oh man. I can't wait to see Aerith's reaction. |