Good story so far! Hope you can update soon!

Hey man, great fix! I was wondering how often you post?

Please continue

oh overprotective northwests? that's new...

Love it! Please update soon!

PILOT OF WHAT?!

And you're still not using quotation marks...

I have not seen anyone do anything like this. I like the idea and would be pleased to see where it goes.
wiki/List_of_Gravity_Falls_episodes
This website should have all of the gravity falls episodes listed in order. I could be wrong, it is what I have based my own watching of the show on.
I am sorry as I am not a great drawer.
Again I think that this is a great idea and I am glad that you came up with it.
Have a good day.

Yeeeeeeeeeeeees! I got so exited when I caught on to what was going on!
Though I think this is more of a Crossover, seeing as you are combining two different tv shows.
Other then that this is a really good start to a story and can't wait to see where it goes! :)

although i can't give you any really advices, i don't recall any similar GF stories, and hope you can continue this one!

this seem like a very interesting idea. if there's another story like this one then i haven't seen them. i didn't see anything wrong aside from a couple of spelling errors here and there. in my personal opinion this seems like it can be a pretty good story. I'll look forward to the next story.

Use quotation marks, they're there for a reason.