| Reviews for Living Life on the Edge |
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   shadbin10 chapter 4 . 10/22/2019 Reading ch 4 feels as if it was written by a completely different person than the one who wrote the chapters 1-3. Ch 1-3 felt as if the writer had a firm grasp on Hikigayas character so it felt constant. Ch 4 however, feels a s though it was written by someone who had never even watched Oregairu in their entire life and didn't know who Hikki was. First of all, Hikki is never desperate, not in the anime, not in the LN. Hikki has a class and he has taste. And Oregairu is not some cheap American series where MC can't tell left to right when he sees the opportunity to get into some hoes pants cuz he is desperate to get a girlfriend. Your portraying of Hikki is shameless and unsophisticated to his character. Hikki is no mangina that he will ask out Totsuka just cuz it didn't work out with Yui. Its shameful and disgraceful and disgusting. You may as well put an OOC tag in bold letters at the start cuz oh boy shit sure gets messed up in ch4. |
| TheLaughingStalk chapter 5 . 6/22/2018 It was spooky for 3 chapters, basically 60% of the story. I'll give you that. It was short but it was alright |
| Kakaroto chapter 4 . 6/20/2018 Hmmm... Wat? |
| Kakaroto chapter 4 . 6/20/2018 ...the he is happening here? |
| TheLaughingStalk chapter 4 . 6/21/2018 Next chapter is the Boss Fight. Don’t forget to stock up on potions and summoning items! |
| JTW2014 chapter 4 . 6/21/2018 This chapter seems rushed as opposed to the other 3 |
| jam99chgo chapter 4 . 6/20/2018 you know psycho orimoto is still better than Yui and a million times better than yukino |
| NoCatAllowed chapter 4 . 6/20/2018 Yep. What The Fuck ? ! |
| CoupErVert chapter 4 . 6/20/2018 wtf? |
| TheLaughingStalk chapter 2 . 6/14/2018 If this is in their 3rd year why don't they know about Orimoto already? and also, Hachiman does not refer to anyone by their given name (even in his thoughts) except for his sister and at some point Haruno. |
| TheLaughingStalk chapter 3 . 6/14/2018 Yikes. Not sure if Yandere or Mega Bitch. |
| DarkNight21 chapter 3 . 6/13/2018 I like this sudden plot twist , and I actually felt that sting from Orimoto text message , nice job . I hope to see your work next time . (_)/ |
| Metal Vile chapter 2 . 6/9/2018 Well, whatever changes you made to the paragraph structure, they're good; the story is smooth and very easy to read. Although there is some odd word choice (there's a section in Ch1 referring to Hayama's group as a "cliché" when I'm pretty sure you meant "clique") |
| Matt chapter 1 . 6/7/2018 Can't wait to see where this will go, keep it up! |
| DarkNight21 chapter 1 . 6/7/2018 I like this can't wait for the next chapter (_)/ |
