I very much enjoyed this... but I guess this fic is finished? I mean it's 2020 right now and you updated this on the 2018 so... But this fic is totally awesome and you should continue this if you have even tiny intention to finish this yeah um i love you?

Please update soon

I heart Tenten’s mom so much! Like kudos for creating such a indifferent person who is wearing her scars proud af. Period. Please do continue this.

Love the mysterious scroll. What wonders and mystery will this bring?

Love how it’s a Tenten fic.
Never read this one quite as well... so far

XD oh my lord, I’m erupting into giggles constantly when reading this. I’ve never read a Tenten-centric fic b4, and you’re making me enjoy it a lot, I cant wait to read the next chapter! I might just start looking for other Tenten-centrics while I wait.

Having Kou have a sense of humor was really nice, I laughed quite a bit in this chapter. I hope you're able to update soon, I'm really enjoying the story.

I loved reading about Tenten! I haven't read much where she's a central character, let alone the main. I loved that her choker was called tacky when it was really her summons. I bet it would be considered cute in our world! A red panda chocker would be awesome. I also loved that the all knowing (or almost all knowing?) scroll had a personality, and a bashful one at that! You're so cute, scroll-san. Will we get to explore more about him? Does he get a paper scroll girlfriend/boyfriend made by Konan somewhere along the way? ;D
Neji getting harassed was my favorite, most excellent.

My favorite subject from high school was fiber arts, I took it twice! Or of my current classes, I love most of Forensic Engineering (the teacher can be hard to deal with, otherwise I would like it more).

Favourite subject in school: English
I LOVED this chapter ! I just adore this story so so so so so much! Brilliant job! I love the mini rivalry between tenten and Neji, as well as the friendship between Sasuke and Tenten, and the burgeoning friendship between Zuni and Tenten! I can’t wait to see who her allies are! This is such a unique story and by far the best Tenten story I’ve read in a long while —- incredible job! Please post the next chapter! I can’t wait to see what happens next! (Ps also loved the addition of Kou - interested to see if Tenten will also be meeting Hinata earlier). Also can’t do wait to see if Tenten tries to befriend Naruto earlier as well. Please update soon!

I love her friendship with Ino so so so much! You’ve written it so well, and the way you’ve characterized Ino is brilliant! When she said "Ask if he's there by choice." I squealed because that is exactly the Ino I love to read - the one that in addition to being kind and gossipy and slightly overbearing in how she shows she cares for people, can also be sharp and smart and intuitive. I also adore how you introduced Sai and ROOT early on. Very interested to see where you go with that! This is such a unique plot and so riveting and has me on the edge of my seat! The story has so much potential and I can’t wait to read every upcoming chapter! I also forgot to mention it in my last review but I love Tenten’s interaction with Anko :-) Fantastic job!

I am just in awe of how amazing Your writing is. Your plot development, dialogue, character interactions, and even your new characters are just handled so well! I especially love Fang, and I think Fang is my favourite OC ever! I also love The mystery surrounding Kanon , and can’t wait to see where you go with it! I also love how you wrote the future friendship between Tenten and Ino, and I found the ending scene so funny I literally laughed out loud :-) I absolutely cannot wait until we meet Neji!

This ... this is EXACTLY the type of story I’ve been hunting for ! What an incredible first chapter, I’m already hooked! I can’t wait to read the rest :-)

Okay! I am so in love with this fic. Sorry for not getting the chance to review chapter 3 after reviewing chapter 2 :/

I know! Tenten was a character with so much potential but she had like zero development :/

Anyways, I am loving the newfound Tenten/Ino friendship :) Aww, I love how happy Ino is to have a gal pal again :D I wonder if this will make Sakura jealous... I love how you have included Sai so early in the story. Maybe, they can save him some suffering if they can rescue him this early.

I love Kanon! She is such a badass awesome mother xD Fang and Yoin are adorable too! I love how you gave the scroll a personality :D

The Tenten/Sasuke aquaintainship is cool too :) LMAO at Sasuke internally laughing at Neji getting stinkbombed.

I am seriously wondering who these ninja that Tenten is going to recruit next :P I am really excited for her meeting the other Konoha 12 too ;) I love Kou too! He is such a sweetheart :)

Okay yes I understand why Neji is acting like an asshole but it doesn't make it any less frustrating :/ I love how you gave Tenten a backbone and not afraid to confront him xD I really look forward to how the NejiTen relationship will develop.

I look forward to more :D

Yay to Sasuke-Tenten Childhood Friendship! :) I've read some fanfics that ship them together.. I have no problem with that because I do kinda get the chemistry..But I'm still NejiTen shipper all the way. :)
Oooohhh and that poke in the cheek by Kanon to Ten.. so fluffy.. I want more! :) Also...bad Neji! tsktsk..can't wait when TenTen finally get into his head and soften him a little bit.

Loving this so far. I hope you find your inspiration to write again..damn that writer's block.. haha.. Thanks you. :)

Your notes are fun to read.. :) And oooohhh ShikaTema! one of my other favorite ship in Naruto-verse.. Hmm.. my crack pairing actually is Ino-TenTen.. Lol! There was a fanfic I've read somewhere.. I forgot the title and the author (sorry..) but it was a fluffy one shot of Ino and TenTen.. I never thought of shipping them, but that fic just made me.. :D Thus, I had wide eyes and Ooohhh-ing when Ino thought Tenten was confessing.. Hahaha.. That's probably one of the reason why I love this fic because there's so much interaction between them I love it. :)

Thanks for another chpater. You're doing awesome! :)