I actually like this story and i would love to read what happened with Natsu in the gintama world.

Doommarine you fucking suck try harder.

Natsu is some lame Sasuke clone, also you're not funny stop trying to be.

Dude love the story pls update soon

Love it! I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Really excited for the next chapter

P.S:Nawen

Interesting story. Keep it Natza please! Btw, cana drinking? Is she still 10 years old?

natsu is gintoki while wendy is kagura and don't tell me gajeel is shinpachi (imagining gajeel wear a glassess while tsukomming other boke) ?

LOL ! Seems like natsu and wendy got transfered into gintama world and natsu got gintoki vibe and attitude while wendy got kagura (yorozuya). I wonder who is got the tsukommi and glasses vibe from shinpachi... Hope you update more faster cause it's fucking funny.

that was hilarious. the only true fairy tail pairing is NaWen! though personally a bro sis relationship is great. stories that are serious that try to focus romance just flop. but since this is comedic, whatever you will works.

seriously though. This was funny and gave me my crack up of the day.

A few things. first don't listen to janembajuice. it's your story, write it how you want. 2nd if you do go for the harem please add Cana and Mirajane. or at least switch the pairing to one of them if you don't do the harem. NatZa is extremely common while Mira and Cana are rarely paired with Natsu. And as for Cana not having as much character development in the show as the others, min my opinion, that's great. it gives you creative freedom with how you want to portray them. So please. At least consider them.

Haha. great to see you back in action.
Can't wait to see more crazy like before.

Please no harem..., most NatZa stories I read and enjoyed turn into harems and completely ruins it. Harems shouldn't fucking exist because it objectifies women and you don't really feel the true love. I'm not a feminist, I'm a dude. just sayin

Ok. I would like to read more

Good start hope to read more