Reviews for Tainted Innocence |
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![]() ![]() This is amazing! Definitely saving this so I can see if you update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was hoping that Pluto was the innocence. Like NIne's monkey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter was amazing! BROTHERLY!CIELLEN FOR THE WIN WOOOOOOO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great improvement from your first version! I love this! keep up the great work! -your biggest fan |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwww i thought it was a new chapter. oh well. It's great, better than the first one. |
![]() ![]() Poor Allen lol I really like the bits and pieces you are revealing about Allen’s past and what happened to him I know that he is aware of the fact that Allen is a Noah but does he know that Allen is the 14th? Great fic :) I cant wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Allen sneezed” That was a wonderful way to end the chapter. Mostly since it was all so serious and suddenly “Allen sneezed” I think your explanation of innocence makes sense. It has to be sentient it some way of it wouldn’t be as powerful as it is. And Apo-creep wouldn’t have existed... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Poker pair so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! A bit surprised that Allen doesn't know the true motives of the Noah but it actually makes the story even more interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I NEED MOOOOOOORE SHSHSHSHS I LOVE THIS |
![]() ![]() ![]() "And we have no other reason to stay. This should definitely make Millennie's day." HEHEHEHEHE That rhymes. :D As usual wonderful chapter :DDDD Well in my opinion innocence is all connected. To each other and to the heart. :D Idrk about the second question though. All I know that it's a terrible experiment and I wish Kanda and Alma didn't have to go through such pain. v.v No criticism! Even though it helps I'm nice.. And the fact I have none. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you portray the characters wonderfly~ I love how the story is going |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another chapter, another fangirl! HHEHEHEHFHESUIGHEAUIOGHAPEGHEPGPA :DDDDDDDDD Omgmg I'm so happy that you updated the amazing fanfiction again. It's like I'm going to... CRY OGMGMGMGGOG! But I'm so excited to see Allen's Noah coming closer as well. MWAHAHAHAHAHHA I wonder how that will play out. Either way I'm so excited and I LOOOOOOOOVE this chapter. Can't wait to see the next one :DDDDDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so in Love, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! AAAAAH! ANOTHET JOB WELL DONE AUTHOR-SAN! |