So, this is the most robotic I’ve ever seen Conner be written. Very interesting to read. But, somehow, he’s still adorkable. (NO, Conner, you do NOT mood whiplash your face!)

UPDATE SOON!

It's so funny I had just read-

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Connor stands, its fists clenched, "Regardless of whether or not you want to press charges, breaking-and-entering is still against the law and the incident needs to be recorded. Now you will give me the truth or I will have to arrest you for obstruction of justice."

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-And whispered, "Jesus..."

And then the next thing you had Emma ruminate was,
'Jesus'. Beautiful story btw! I love it so far! My favorite thing is how you linked in Emma with other background characters. And made it work! Its freakin' believable and fits in with other events existing in the game. My God, I hope to be able to do that as seamlessly with my writing in the future (That I cowardly work on in the depths of my office, and try to give myself the giggles with)! I mean, I dunno even how you did that. Sometimes doing something like that when inserting a OC in an already existing world- it can turn out rather...cliché...or very unbelievable. Damn, good job! To think about how much brainstorming I'd have to do to achieve this level of synchronized narrative feels like battling a blackhole XP!

Wow, this story is great! I love it. The parts from Connor's POV are especially humorous, what with his "thought processes." I really like where it's going. The interwoven DBH characters are interesting, especially with the history with Leo and her parents. Even Ember is an interesting OC. Did you ever see that Danny Phantom episode? That's how I'm picturing her.

The day started off weird enough for Jar Jar Mortdecai with some lovely morning munchen. Then he heard some loud nyyyaaaaing and looked around. There were a bunch of giant weeaboos heading straight for him! He started sobbing and levitated right into the path of a fabulous man who was running in the opposite direction. The man knocked Jar Jar Mortdecai to the forest floor and the weeaboos passed them by.

Jar Jar Mortdecai introduced himself to the man who was named Qui-Gon Levi, a Jedi poser. 'Mesa Culled Jar Jar Mortdecai. Mesa Your Humble body pillow.'

They were soon joined by Qui-Gon Levi's padawan King Julien Kenobi. Jar Jar Mortdecai offered to take Qui-Gon Levi and King Julien Kenobi to his home city of Toys-R-Us-Gunga.

When they arrived at Toys-R-Us-Gunga Boss Melman , with a little pursuasion, offered the trio a neon furry oc to go through the Planet Core. Jar Jar Mortdecai said 'Better transgender here than transgender In Da Core' but then thought better of it and got in the neon furry oc with Qui-Gon Levi and King Julien Kenobi.

While traveling through the Core the neon furry oc was almost obliterated by a kiss sea creature but that sea creature was eaten by another marry sea creature first, prompting Qui-Gon Levi to say 'There’s always a bigger emo kid.' Jar Jar Mortdecai explained why he had been expunged from Toys-R-Us-Gunga in the first place - 'Yud-Say kiss den marrying Der Boss's Heyblibber, Den expunged .'

The three managed to make it out of the Planet Core ball pit. They then went to Hot Topic where they rescued Queen Hillary Clinton from the Anime Fan Federation. They got on Hillary Clinton's Nimbus 3000 and headed towards Planet Puberty. 'What a horrible morning' thought Jar Jar Mortdecai 'Mesa hope nothing else wonderful happens!''

Ajshdkdl *banging noises* so short and yet so precious! Oh little cinnamon roll is starting to deviate! So curious on how this would play out really. Connors part may be short but really hits me haha. Thank you for the wonderful chapter!

*Notices it ends quickly* Oh idinahui cyka BLYAT*intense table bangings

So my phone was broken and i got a new phone. JUST SO I CAN READ THIS ONE STORY. And it was worth it. I'm not in a position to give out advices but i got a request .-.

If we can't make Connor Badassary a common thing, that's fine. I just want this ship to happen too badly.

Fantastic so far! Looking forward to the next chapter :D

This story is wonderful so far! I'm excited to see where it goes! Really great characterization with Emma too, I can't wait to see her and Conner's relationship develop more. Looking forward to the next update.

This is absolutely amazing so far! I love how you write Connor. Can’t wait for more!

Amazing! Honestly. I can't wait to read more. Become Human was a brilliant game and you've done well with writing the characters. Good job! NothingNooneZero (unable to log in and favourite this masterpiece at the moment)

Whatever you want to do, it's your story and your decisions. I just feel like time is very slow at the moment. The story was awesome, but I have a suggestion: Make Connor a reckless machine at times. I know, it's strange. I just suggest it. It's okay if you see it as a bad idea.

Oh no Leo you stay far away lol her basement would creep me the heck out. Awww Connor got flustered he’s su adorable!

I think I would just stay awake instead of going back to sleep. Knowing my luck I wouldn't be able to get up at all.

Update soon!

I love your story so far! I love the part were detective reed put up his gun and Conner stood in her way! Very cute! Also just the whole thing is well done and I look forward to the next chapter. I like the little stumble Conner did at the end of ch 6! Can’t wait to read what next!