Haha! Love the HP reference at the end!

Oh, that was awesome! I wasn't sure how you were going to wrap that all up in one chapter, but you did such a good job X) Loki's transformations were perfect. There is nothing in this chapter that doesn't make me happy.

This, I like this. Maybe... a small sequel showing Loki's friendships with Wanda and Strange? I love how you made it so Thanos didn't actually get to do 'the snap'. nom

...ready? I'm really enjoying this, so I'm gonna say yes ;)

Loved Strange's narration. I like how much he DOESN'T like Loki. I don't know why, I just find it amusing. I really enjoyed his perception of the place they're in. Loki's entire demeanor about it was really entertaining. He really gets a kick out of making people uncomfortable, doesn't he? I get the feeling that both he and Strange do care about Wanda - on some level - which I think both in character, and sweet. Loki's dialogue is really cool - I've noticed it before, but it stood out specifically for me in this chapter, for some reason - It's always double-edged. He says something that seems straightforward, but, having spent SOME time in his head, you get a feeling that it's not as simple as it looks. I feel like maybe - just maybe - Strange and Wanda are about to get a slightly more accurate picture of his psyche, courtesy of the creepy critters in this 'interdemsional plane'. I'm really intrigued by that ;)

Oh, also, loved the little nod to the movie events, with Strange aware of Wanda's death. I'm excited to see the new direction the story is taking!

Nice Chapter, Quick question is the pairing of Loki/Wanda a possibility for the future?

Please continue!

Awesome story! I can't wait to read more. I really like how Loki surviving instead of Thor causes a different story line!

good start

I LOVED that. That whole chapter was - seriously - breathtaking. I love thunderstorms, so the opening of this chapter drew me in instantly, and I don't think i've been even marginally aware of my surroundings ever since. It was poetic and beautiful. I can't even begin to describe to you in words how much I enjoyed Loki's interaction with Wanda in this chapter. Every word was perfect. The movies always show her flailing, trying to find her way in a world she doesn't understand. It was incredible to see Loki provide some modicum of the guidance she's starving for. He's surprisingly good at it, too.

Or maybe not surprisingly. I loved seeing him live out his memories with Frigga. Teaching Wanda is one way for him to be with his mother again, and I thought that was sweet. I could HEAR his voice in every word. The way he talked about the Hunt was amazing. I've never heard it summarized that way, but I understand what Loki was talking about. I'm definitely going to have to look up that poem ;)

I laughed at Loki and Stephen, showing each other up with umbrellas, and I'm glad that Loki taught Wanda how to do it too. The fact that he calls her 'witchling' is really cute, somehow ;)

All in all, a triumph.

This story had me hooked from the first chapter. Their interactions were amazing especially Loki and Wanda’s. Hope you can update soon!

OMG.
I LOVE YOU.
Tú no tienes idea de cuánto tiempo estuve buscando un fic con Wanda; Loki y Strange como protagonistas.
O sea, es justamente como yo me lo imaginé.
Aunque siempre imaginaba que Strange buscaba a Loki y a Wanda.
En este caso, se podría decir que Loki es el pegamento del trío, me gusta como lo estás caracterizando, muy IC. Wanda es joven, inexperta pero tan llena de potencia en el equipo. Eso es algo en lo que coincidimos totalmente.
La pelea/ entrenamiento de Loki y Wanda fue un tanto cómica. Stephen estaba en el medio tratando que no rompieran nada.
Me encanta la historia. Estoy muy impaciente.
Me gustaría saber si en este fic tú vas a otorgarle el apodo a Wanda, yo fangirlearía si ellos llegan a llamarla Scarlet Wich.

Okay, I'm actually WILDLY curious about that book.

You write so well! I LOVE your rendition of Loki. I love how deliberate and calculated you make him. He's really entertaining. And Wanda was on-point. I enjoyed their conflict enormously. Loki's analysis of her magic was fantastic. I loved watching him test her. I feel bad for Strange, though, having to put up with the two of them ;)

And the idea of Loki teaching Wanda how to use magic? I'm hoping this turns out differently from the movie just so I can see that happen!

hope you update soon

Oh my gosh I love it. Your previous chapters were good, this is better. I love love LOVE the idea of a Loki/Strange alliance. And you've provided the only person who could make it better ;)

Their voices were flawless. The dialogue, the mannerisms, the through processes - all of it was perfect. I am SO excited to see how this goes down. EVERY MOMENT is spot on. I wrote a Strange/Loki alliance one-shot recently, and they are not easy to write together. I'm beyond impressed by your ability to write them. So, so well done!

lol. I'm looking forward to that ;)

Loved this chapter. I think you wrote Rocket really well, and I'm loving his interactions with Loki. He picks up a lot of detail...for a rabbit ;)

Seriously enjoying this.