The s chapter was corny

jeez, this red eye thing is so cringe, I'm gonna pretend I didn't see that...

Man what a story you are writing and with a different pairing. This story continues, it's perfect.

I am confused now in this chapter and chapter 20, if Pein/Nagato destroyed Konohagakure, why didn’t you just put the fight with Jiraiya, Danzo, and Naruto against him in the next chapter. I like what you did to Naruto having him an evil demon I did don’t get me wrong, but I got confused when you had Jiraiya and Danzo fought Rhaast in this chapter, and not fight Pein/Nagato in chapter 19, wouldn’t it make more sense if he got more angrier in the next chapter after fighting Pein though?

Chapter 19 completely lost me. This new character has completely thrown me off your plot. It’s like I’m reading a completely different story. I hope this gets back on track, I liked it until Naruto got possessed

Nice ATLA reference

Fuck I was on the edge about your story but now you lost me.. Damn this has wasted my time..

Why does it always seem like Naruto is getting his ass beat.. He's pretty weak for the S-rank.

WTF all that training and he can't beat Orochi.. Orochimaru is not all that strong tricky but not strong, as long as you know that it's not that hard to beat him..

Love the story I wish there were more naruto and tsunade moments tho

Can’t wait for the next chapter like holy shit

I really really hope you continue with this story. I am loving it so far

If there's something I hate in a Naruto fic it's when authors use the comedic punches Naruto get from being a dumbass and use as a fuel for some revenge story

If that what it took for Naruto to turn his back on everything he stood for then he's a retard

Damn good first chapter. I like how naruto surprised Sasuke.

Probably Konohagakure? it’s either Kid is from Konoha or he isn’t, not probably…