Reviews for To Discover What Follows
Lord-Sylph chapter 3 . 5/12/2019
I know this is a MakiNico story, but I can’t help but feel so bad for poor Rubes!
Rabakku chapter 10 . 2/20/2019
This was hella good. While the general summary (doctor and patients fall in love, rules cause issues, so and so) felt cliche, it definitely was very original in many respects, and you delivered well on it.

I kinda put off reading this. I saw it 3 or 4 times and the summary was so vague that I didn't know what to really expect, and I kinda put it off because of that. But it was that same summery that made me curious the 30 or so times I've passed over the story strolling down the archive.

I'm a little disappointed, that this is a newer story in the fandom, and wasn't present during the height of it. Due to that, this great story isn't getting nearly as much recognition as it should have.

Thank you for the read, a ton. Very few grammatical errors were present, and I never had to re-read a sentence to grasp it's meaning. The plot went nicely, not rushed but not overly drawn out either. I loved the plot itself, and it was pretty heart warming, especially the final scenes with Ruby. I love how you portrayed the characters, and you kept their personality nearly perfect, which I believe is the hardest part of fan fiction. So, once more, thank you for the read, I really enjoyed it and who knows, I might even give it re-read one day.
luvnanofate chapter 10 . 11/9/2018
Wow! What a powerful story. I just love these two together. Your character development was spot on I think and the storyline flowed well. I do hope you find it in your ability to write them again sometime, you do it so well. I wish you had a chance to do a story of Chikane and Himeko (Kannazuki no Miko or Destiny of the Shrine Maidens) because your writing ability, I believe, would fit them perfectly. But that is an old anime/manga that many here have not ever heard of. Thank you for your hard work and bset of luck going forward.
Jay
Psykoakuma chapter 10 . 10/18/2018
Aaaaah! So sweet! I really love the Idol confrontation moment! The unexpected humor had me laughing at Nico's hotter, smarter doctor line! This is a really great ending as come away feeling the future is full of so much love and happiness for these two!

Mari Ohara is insufferable lol! I wanna unleash a sex starved Kanan on her ass!
Oooh, ooooh, oooh!
cygnusx11111 chapter 7 . 10/16/2018
I love the metaphors. So glad I came across this fic
Zwei Eis chapter 10 . 10/16/2018
Great ending gosh this pair of dorks is always fun to read but you have made it your own like if you changed the names it would still be good
Psykoakuma chapter 9 . 10/12/2018
Wow what a ride! I love how Maki-chan experiences such complex and nuanced emotions in her relationships. I actually relate very strongly with her, so some of these moments (Ruby especially) resonate powerfully. Nico is a joy to behold! She's really so much fun and makes even the simplest moments with Maki very special!
It really has been a while. I got to wondering what happened as I thought the epilogue would be a quick shorty more or less. Looking forward to the final finality!
Eramis8 chapter 9 . 10/10/2018
I didn't ask for these fluffy feelings today, but I guess dinner is cotton-candy Nicomaki tonight.

All joking aside, you did an excellent job of balancing the time skip and the relationship between our favorite Senpai/kouhai pair. Great ro see back!
Psykoakuma chapter 8 . 7/7/2018
AAAAAAAAAAHHH! This is so beautiful!
But Maki-chan please! I know your stubborn nature is charming but PLEASE! Nico all but declared her undying love! At the wedding are you going to be like, "it's not like I'm wearing this wedding dress for you..." AH bless Nico's biggest little heart for keeping faith in this difficult girl! I mean even Non-chan deserves to make fun of Makkles at this point!
I lol'd at Maki grabbing Nico's knee with all the Nico-nii talk going on.
Zwei Eis chapter 8 . 7/7/2018
So adorable and don't worry about time I'll wait till the inevitable heat death of the universe for the finish if I have to
Guest chapter 8 . 7/6/2018
This is gorgeous..thanks for this..
Psykoakuma chapter 7 . 7/5/2018
Wah! So many emotions running through this chapter!
I'm really impressed with the level of maturity and true-to-life repercussions that come with the music room tryst. There's no way I can condemn Maki or Nico for what they experienced and how they reacted. I think Umi-chan really puts things into the most reasonable context. Possibly the most ideal outcome is that Nico finds new meaning much like Umi has, putting her skills to use in the form of music therapy. That way maybe she can finally get through to Maki-chan, and help them both figure out what they are truly feeling! Then they can hurry up and get married and adopt those precious Kurosawa sisters!
Now that I've seen most of the story I really believe the material is fine with a rating lower than M.
Psykoakuma chapter 6 . 7/5/2018
Interesting how much the Ruby drama has taken over driving the story. I was almost reduced to useless tears this time! Anyway not much thought of Nico's career and physical recovery anymore. I'm really glad Nico's going along with Maki's plan.
Psykoakuma chapter 5 . 7/5/2018
GASP! Well shit it looks like Maki's the one who needs healing now! Don't let that tsundere exterior discourage you NicNics!
NOOOOOOOOOOOoooooo Ruby-chan! I felt something like this was coming. At least Rin is one happy cat happier.
Psykoakuma chapter 4 . 7/4/2018
Oh my god this chapter is painfully beautiful!
Makkles, can't you see Nico needs a different kind of healing? One that only a Maki-chan can provide! I'm really curious about the rating though. This is seriously cute and adorable with minor elements of hurt. Certainly nothing that would warranting... Oh wait, there better not be anything horrific in store for Roobles!
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