Hey, I just saw a pv about the Fgo and I can't help but wonder is possible that Kirito can do what Sengo Muramasa do in the pv like cut a mountain in half vertically, I know that I have say that Kirito have three soul or something but after seeing the Fgo pv, I can't imaging that somehow that in the future Fgo chapter I will have to fight Sengo and see what kind of power he has, plus since your story also related to the fate series in a way I don't see what harm that adding the skill or ability of Sengo in Kirito as well.

If that kind of idea will be Overkill, well don't blame me for that after seeing the pv even just a few second of Sengo scene it make me wonder that even Sengo used Shirou body as a host or something but Sengo skill of make sword is almost unparallelled because form history itself say that Sengo Muramasa is a demonic blacksmith that whatever sword, katana or anything he make is cursed but I haven't seen his swordsmanship yet but I can feel that he is better than any other swordsman because some say that "you can't call yourself a swordsman because you make your own sword", I don't know that is it true or false though, even some other swordsman have make history of their own and some of them say that them have the sword, katana and other weapon that Muramasa have made before but like I say that I don't know it is true or false. To whoever that have used the weapon that Muramasa made, they have also been cursed because that the weapon Muramasa made is almost always desire for blood if I remember correctly.

Not that I want Kirito to gone mad or something but I just wanted to see what happen that when he has the skill or ability(swordsmanship) of Muramasa, I mean from your story you did say that Kirito did make his own weapon unlike the original Sword Art Online series, only up until I see the pv that remind me of Muramasa blacksmith ability that Kirito have as well, but unlike Muramasa, Kirito weapon didn't seen to be cursed and his swordsmanship only get stronger so why not make the final battle of Kirito use some kind of skill and Noble Phantasm that may related to Muramasa. It is your story so is up to you so best of luck of your story.

P.S: try listen to the music that the Fgo pv, I quite like it as well as it scene. Only that in the future it may also have to battle Olga Marie(beast)(Japanese version Fgo, other version I don't know yet).

Excellent update thank you

Is been some time though but never mind beside other than your story I also found some story related to the fate series during your story absence and also excited as your own fanfic.

Well since neither orochimaru and Kabuto are the one who use Edo tensei then I am eager to find out who behind it, by the way since kisame is still in the akatsuki who will he face during battle in war( hope that you put guy again not that I sadist but I wanted to see another mental breakdown of kisame only this time is more creepier and more mental attack or something)( or maybe both bee and Al the duo muscle brother even more mental scream than the last one)( or even all people that have muscle just like the one I say before). And if he did came across itachi, I also kind of imaging that he will curse itachi to hell for putting such horror illusion on him and swear that he will kill itachi if it the last thing he would do before death.

By the way since the anime sword art online is now aired and you can maybe have some inspiration or idea to how combine the Naruto and Sao fanfic of your( no offend and not saying your story isn't good just sometime both anime and novel or even comic can have some more back story that they didn't mention, like I say no offend). Oh and the third division I believe is sinon, kakashi and Sasuke was it right, if they were the one who encounter the third raikage then how do they make the raikage hit himself with his spear finger not that I want spoiler but in the anime that Naruto manage to use the rasengan to redirect it course into hitting his crest, or you maybe make kakashi is the one who use rasengan this time( kakashi did know rasengan right) but he only manage to because of the sharingan unlike Naruto who has his sage mode.

I remember that PS4 has also a kingdom hearts game that can choose which one you want to play and kingdom hearts 2 final mix is in it as well I believe, well you don't have to do the fanfic I only suggest the idea though, not that I won't do a story I just don't know how to use handphone to do a fanfic story. Not that why I didn't use a laptop, I do have a laptop( rather to say a laptop more like a full set computer) but some error function in the system that now is busted and right now the covid and I also didn't get a work to do so I can only use some money for emergency. Still hope that you can update soon and don't feel down, we the people who support your story will always be with you, all the best.

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hey man, well I have to tell you that, when I posted it on wattpad, it didn't gain a thousand reads, so I deleted it and abandoned, so I decided to create my own story, and it already reach a thousand read and it kept rising, the story is half cringey and half dialogou, means I put too much or less informations, and a few 4th wall breaks, and I hope you feel well, and keep doing what you do best, now I have been writing in wattpad more because your viewers could comment on a specific sentence and make some Author friends, there's alot of great authors in Wattpad that I stop writing in FF. Net and you get responses all the time and keep track of your following authors on what they're doing, anyways I'll keep waiting, I can wait even for a month if the story is good like SAO, welp that's all for me

Despite the big words they actually sound like five-year-olds talking

I honestly think Naruko would be a better name then Hikari

i came in to this story not expecting much, just honestly wanted to see what you execution of everything was gonna be. i read up to this point and honestly i think your going well with this story. you've gotten more comfortable writing and it shows but i have a critic at least this far in. I'm not too sure whether you have already fixed it later in the story but You lack imagery in your story. at the beginning it made the first few chapters feel like a bit of a bore to read and u are getting better but i think more imagery will def take your story to a new level. other than that i find myself enjoying this story and hope u continue.

Sorry about that, I press the wrong button. Mature mind and some kenjustu and magic ability, she have to keep the power hidden from everyone include Hiruzen, but until she facing zabuza or orochimaru that she have use the keyblade(a sword or katana version sorry I didn't say it earlier in my review) and the dark power to fight off her opponent. If during fighting zabuza that she review her ability than I hope that both zabuza and haku didn't die, if during orochimaru than he try to mark her with curse seal but the blade has a ability that consume the curse seal or he didn't know the power so he have his ass kick. Well is up to you, I only give some idea.

P.P.P.P.S: this REALLY is my longest post review EVER on your fanfic.

P.P.P.S: well not all the story has to cross over from KH, just that in young age of 4 to 6 that she been attack by some civilian and some ninja that didn't like her, she escape to the forest of death or outside the village that a portal or some kind of gate appear that link to the dark world. She obtain Riku keyblade and with the blade reckon she to be it's new wielder and grow back to the original length than the heartless tornado arrive to fight her, scene she new to the power she manage to defeat the heartless but in the dark world didn't have time concept she been fighting for as long as a decade or two. Than she was manage to understand some meaning of life and death, she able to return to the village by a sudden portal but with a mature m

Nice chapter, so you also paly FGO as well which version? If Japan version you can add me, my id is 848405024 if other version I don't know if can allow or not I didn't try I have play nearly 2 years and few month. Just wish that it can have some pass event to replay as the course, I miss a lot of the pass servant such as nobunaga Archer and such.

By the way, in case will orochimaru join the shinobi alliance or he will just destroy Konoha during the war? If by chance that orochimaru decide to join alliance will he reanimated the all forth hokage and maybe Kayaba(if he can be summon of course) to join the war,and that the first hokage have some knowledge of the underworld and some ability add to he mokuton, and as for Minato maybe he has all the knowledge of underworld because he was inside of Shinigami maybe or Kayaba have tell Minato all about underworld rather than tell Hiruzen(no disrespect). Also that is there a way to reanimated the dead to the living unlike Madara rinne tensei, if do than I wish that Hikari will reunion with both Minato and Kushina in the future such as kirito has the ability or ancient power of "kazuto" or such, than as for ending like I say before they live in some mansion or some tradition house like Emiya house in the fate series like the Shirou have as a ending I post before. I know that I asking a lot but many time that rereading the fanfic of your just give me some imagination of the story with many different of way to end the story with happy ending though also some sad ending but I put that away form my mind because there are also other viewer that would like happy ending like me but with different kind of ending. Well this might be my longest post review ever, well the option is your for the taking thought I do wish that you can consider some of my idea.

P.S: can you do a "Naruto" and "kingdom hearts" x-over fanfic? I have some idea but I didn't have time to do the story, if you do here is some idea I have : 1. (you can put Naru(fem Naruto) as MC as you wanted though) Naru live a life such as Roxas but just like how the kingdom hearts 2 opening until Sora wake up. 2. Naru was consume by darkness in early age to the dark world, but like Riku(you can give her silver or white hair if you like) she able to have both light and darkness and came out of the dark world with mature mind state(in the dark world she does grow but the shinobi world time didn't pass). As she obtain maybe Riku broken keyblade(The Ways To The Dawn) than she able to return the shinobi world with the ability of both light and darkness, kenjutsu , the dark firaga or something(up to you).

P.P.S: wow, this IS my longest post review ever.

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Well, sorry but I already posted 8 chapters, and I update it every saturday wether it be 1 or 2 chapters per saturday, anyway no I never have any problems on uploading those chapters, it:s just that It takes time to find some errors you've done in the pass and the format is different, it is just like Fanfiction. Net but the problem I have is the pics, which I have forgotten to put pics of Important characters except the main ones, anyway Great chap as always, see ya next chap

P.S if you want to make an Original story in wattpad then do those challange you did in your profile, I find some of them becoming popular and also put HD quality picture if you want to gain viewers and a lot of readers always underestimate the story based on the picture cover of the book, just saying.

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Excellent work