| Reviews for Carla Decker, Bounty Hunter |
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   lionabrown04 chapter 3 . 7/9 Please continue this |
| XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 12/31/2019 Wait, she's a bounty Hunter but a bullet grazes her side and she falls unconscious? wow, talk about underwhelming. |
| LadyBugQueen421 chapter 3 . 9/5/2019 Love your story! |
| RebornRose1992 chapter 3 . 7/7/2019 Good story! |
| YuYuHakushoObsesser chapter 3 . 5/15/2019 beautifully written! absolutely love and severely can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
| Autumn chapter 2 . 4/22/2019 I don’t really see much of the bounty hunting |
| windwolf1988 chapter 3 . 2/11/2019 Cool fix look forward to seeing where it goes |
| Rose chapter 2 . 1/12/2019 I just watched all of Lucifer and found this story after and it is really good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and new dialogue between her and Lucifer. |
| nicmajebo chapter 2 . 1/7/2019 I think your writing is really great, but so far you’ve only kept the story line the exact same just giving Carla some of the other characters lines. I super hope that you diverge it or develops Carla and her relationship with Lucifer outside of canon. I’d be really interested in reading that. |
| BlueBloodsSVUOrder chapter 2 . 10/23/2018 Is this going to continue? Would like to read more. :) :) |
| AzarielShax chapter 2 . 9/2/2018 Hello :) Nice story you've started! I like the idea of Chloe having a sister. More headaches for poor Lucifer! :D Buuut I find it a bit sad, that you seem to simply retell the episodes of S1... I mean, you can go with some dialouge parts and the plot in general, but try to throw in more original moments! Something we don't know! Something we won't expect, instead of taking already written lines and letting your OC say them. How about some more dialogue between Chloe and Carla? Some chatting about their lives, how they're doing... something to give more inside into Carla. The commentary on Maze's move with the cocktail-umbrella-thingy was quite good! Throw more of this into your story! Make it your own instead of just telling us, what we already know word by word! Looking forward to reading more! Cheers! |
| Arianna Le Fay chapter 2 . 9/1/2018 oh my god i cant believe you update :D i love it carla and lucifer are so perfect together please update soon i cant wait to see what happens next |
| Aurick244 chapter 2 . 8/31/2018 Very funny adaptation, looking forward to more |
| AwesomeFangirlOtaku01 chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 I like it! Amazing so far! I so ship CarCifer! |
| LAIsobel chapter 1 . 6/16/2018 nice first chapter. i must say that it was very long for my taste, i got lost a few times in the dialogues... but that's just me being tired. over the yeats of reading here I'd sat that the optimal length for a lon yet easily readible chapter is around 4000 words tops. maybe next time try to split up. |
