Reviews for Philip's Phailure
Carameleo chapter 1 . 7/24
Surprisingly - this is not very far from what happened in the Novel.

Rejoice - Philip is dead.
Starlord Master chapter 1 . 6/25
I hate idiots.
thegovernancedropbox chapter 1 . 4/6
This is utterly brilliant, and you avoid the trap many Overlord writers fall in by leaving the truly monstrous stuff to our imagination at jut the right moment.

If that's how she starts... great maker, what's next?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1
yes
Starlord Master chapter 1 . 1/31
So long, prick!
Degu chapter 1 . 11/24/2019
A slight change to Ainz leads to him prioritizing punishing Philip over having him continue to act as a pawn, and I'm glad to be able to read about karma crashing down on the idiot's head so soon. A well-written and satisfying addition.
BUFBUODA chapter 1 . 10/28/2019
I hate Philip.

Thank you ️
Deathstrokenator chapter 1 . 11/11/2018
That was awful (in a good sense!), It was like watching a train wreck. You know it is going to end badly but you can't stop watching.

My only criticism would be Ainz being somewhat OOC but I guess it's a writer's perogative to change some stuff.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2018
This has to be by far the most awesome first page I read so farcan't wait to read more
Alrarora chapter 1 . 9/22/2018
She ripped his penis off didn't she?
Thank you for this btw.
Bye!
Ashkar chapter 1 . 9/14/2018
That was good stuff! I like this AinzXAlbedo version you wrote!
Deliberatee chapter 1 . 8/19/2018
I only got around to this part of the story in the LN lately and even I felt disgusted when he touched her shoulder even if Albedo was playing a role of a demure gentlewoman. I mean Albedo's a succubus but she's still a virgin because she can't and won't entertain the thought of any another man than Momonga. Shalltear proclaims to love Papa Bones too but we all know that's because of her necrophilia setting. She also has it easy yuri-ing it up but Albedo doesn't have that luxury. Her only hope is that Ainz will reciprocate (he should take responsibility! XD) I noticed he's more affectionate to Albedo in the LN too, even if he doesn't seem to be aware of it most of the time.

Then here comes an idiot that thinks he can touch whatever and whoever. Shits like Philip always have a sense of importance that is never deserved. I was quite surprised Albedo let him live, honestly.

This fic is gold. More please! I ship Momonga and Albedo (have a girl crush on her and Narberal) lol. While the question of how (and if) they can progress their relationship since Momonga has a certain part of his body missing is still up in the air, they exist in a world where magic is a reality so anything is possible.
Machiavellius chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
I decided to check your other work since I enjoyed Cardinal so much, I'm glad I did! Great stuff!
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
Oh Demiurge you loyal smug crafty bastard. Nice little read.
saliaskonstant chapter 1 . 7/16/2018
Oh man, this story is great! I'm glad I found this while waiting for Cardinal of Sin :D
Jade Tatsu, you're good!
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