Sorry, that last review was intended for a different story than yours. My bad!

I have a hard time believing that Trixie has the potential and skill to be one of Celestia's pupils at this point. But other than that, a good start!

Do you think you can do a fanfiction about what happens after Season 9 of My Little Pony? Because even it ended in Season 9, I would like to see what other adventures the ponies and creatures of Equestria are having. Thank you!

Hey, good chapter. I like how your writing style seems to mostly be talking.

Good luck writing more!

I laughed like 3 times at this! Maud and Trixie sure are different.

Keep up the good work! :D

I agree with my sister about the ending of the story. I'm been tired too, but found spare time. That one part of the final episodes was already inspiring, and you made it better. You gave speaking parts to characters we thought would never talk again, that's why.

I'm sorry for taking so long to review. I've just been so tired lately. You put a lot of great extra scenes during the recruitment of the final battle of the series. This was a great way to end the story. Especially giving a speaking part to Tempest and certain other characters.

Please do a chapter about Discord being Grogar!

I agree with my sister about the chapter. It makes sense that Discord would hang out with the Young Six when everyone else is busy. A certain character is still able to help others out when it matters.

This was a great chapter about Discord and the Young Six. He's able to have fun with them, but then they all manage to offend each other. Luckily someone important is able to help them all make up.

Next to Spike, I would've liked to see the Young Six develop a friendship with the wacky spirit that is Discord himself.

I agree with my sister about the chapter. I've been tired as well, but I found the time to review it. Sugar Belle was as girly as Apple Bloom's teacher, so it was great that she ended up with Big Mac.

I meant to review sooner, I've just been so tired. This was a really nice chapter about Big Mac and Sugar Belle. Sugar Belle came out of nowhere in the show, but she turned out to be pretty great.

I agree with my sister about the chapter. We could both see Garble getting a girlfriend in the show after he redeems himself. Smolder getting jealous would also happen. It's also good to see a total creep get exactly what they deserve after what they did to Spike in an episode. It was a good idea to just see dragons in this chapter.

I meant to review sooner, but I've been so tired lately. This was a really great chapter. It makes sense that Smolder would be jealous of her brother getting a girlfriend. Luckily she overcomes her jealousy and helps stop the crook of the Dragon Lands. I'm sure Spike was very pleased to stop the crook after what they had done to him.