This was soooo good! Is there a continuation?

This was so so so good. You are an absolutely brilliant writer. This had me so hooked the entire way through. I had to take breaks because of University study, but the entire time I wasn't reading this, I kept thinking about how I wanted to be reading it haha. It's so amazing. You crafted such a fantastic world and see mamoru as a strong character in his own right was brilliant. Very exciting, captivating and heartwarming. Definitely recommend to anyone who wants so great usamamo vibes as well as brilliant senshi story.

Loving the updated version! Thanks so much for continuing to share your writings, can't wait to get stuck into the sequel xxx

Beautiful! You did an amazing job. Very well written and original story.

Ok, I reread the story and I really loved it. I loved the original, but this one was so much better. Great job!

Beeeeeeejjjj omg this was SUCH A WILD RIDE and I LOVED every second of it! (Which was a lot of seconds btw cus damn is this thing a monster of a fic...).

Where to even start? Like , ugh how you write Mamo is so good and amazing and inspiring for me! I could really FEEL how he felt and what he was going through. And Usagi in the later chapters too, ugh.

Such AMAZING characterization through the whole thing, really. I love the generals, and love the girls. It was great to see how they changed slightly after getting their memoriesmixing of their past and present selves.

AND GIRL THE ANGST IS SO REAL. You were KILLING ME.

The end of CH 13 and first half of 14 had me SOBBINGlike full on sobbing in my bed not being able to stop reading even tho it’s wayyyyy past my bedtime.

I’m soooooo looking forward to reading some more of your longer fics, including the sequel to this beautiful creation! 3

hermosa me encanto de principio a fin tantas cosas que te pude decir quiero seguir leyendo cosas tuya aunque me cuesta mucho yo no hablo ni leo in ingles mucha suerte

Wow. This was such a wonderful story! I absolutely love your writing style! Please never stop writing. You have a beautiful gift!

Thank you for the amazing & epic story. I was reading it over the week, and I had to step away from the story to handle the raw feels that your story pulled out of me. I really like the backstories you gave each general and the different ways they acted around their significant other, as well as the interesting note about each of them having a past before Beryl took control of them. I wonder who they were and if that will have any impact on their lives moving forward?

Also, the fact that you were bold enough to have Usagi be the one captured and brainwashed is brilliant, as well as the dramatic irony that Beryl had Usagi demand the Silver Crystal... which is right in her. And I love that in the end, they saved everyone by using both their crystals (even though Mamoru doesn't know he has one at this point) to save everyone. Hope you have a nice day and stay safe.

You are so amazing! I love this. It is so easy to lose time. I get so caught up in the moment. I want to keep you!

Wow. Just wow.

This story definitely is a twist in time. This is the only story I've yet read that sends only Mamoru back in time.

I especially like the brainwashing sequence, even though it's a little abbreviated at the end; because it captures the victim's experience with a haunting intensity.

Keep narrating,
Ranma-sensei

Poor Mamo-Chan! I can’t imagine dealing with all the memories and the feelings and everything. No wonder he lost control and broke the cup.

Oh my goodness! I’m utter trash for time travel fics in general, but this? Saving the Shitennou? Oh, YES PLEASE! I’m so excited and we haven’t even begun yet!

I love that you used Sailor Pluto as the impetus. She rarely gets any screen time.

Hey there! I just wanted to let you know that your original „twist in time“ was one of my very first Sailor Moon fanfiction stories I’ve read and I loved it! You and a hand full of other writers are the reason why I decided to hop into this chaotic world of writing! I adore your fantastic work and look forward to read more of your stories...since they touch my heart so deeply!

Okay, I forgive you. But sheesh, girl, that was one HELL of a rollercoaster. And you’ve made me love a time travel story, damn you.