I liked the ending, and lol Emma got him with ice feet. The fog reminds me of Narnia Voyage of the Dawn Treader.

What a battle!? It was crazy, but a pretty cool idea. And it worked. Maleficent is hopefully taken care of for good, and Killian spoke one of my favorite lines, hello beautiful.

I was suspicious of the book lying in the dead prince's hand. Very interesting with the details of the curse and now Maleficent appearing. Looking to more and how things unfold.

OMG! That was a surprise cliff hanger!

I just found this story, and I really like it. I’m so glad Killian didn’t get too involved with Milah and chose to stay with Emma. I’m glad to see the adventures they will face, especially with Emma fighting her feelings

I like Nifty the dwarf. Is he an original character or one of THE seven?

Really enjoyed the chapter. Nice balance of fun and serious from talking over breakfast, sparring, and Emma sharing her past. What you said about her skills makes sense. Also that would have scared the crap out of me if I was the one in the tub when a ghost came in. Looking forward to more of this story and the other update.

Another great chapter! I love the banter between Killian and Emma and I still wish we got more sword fight scenes with them in the show. I’m looking forward to the next update :)

This is wonderful!

Interesting! I like it so far, very excited to see where this takes Them! I also like that it's not Regina they are running from, it's different and good! keep it up!

I'm really enjoying your story. The only thing is that sometimes I read it here and others on AO3.