Reviews for On The Outside
Lerrinus chapter 7 . 5/12
Beautifully done! You've captured everyone's voices perfectly! Keep up the awesome work! :-)
Guest chapter 7 . 3/16/2019
Uhh yeah now I need a sequel in which Stephen joins them
CupcakeGoodness101 chapter 7 . 9/3/2018
Very well done! :D
Guest chapter 3 . 7/19/2018
"Is my kid the only one that doesn't know trains are normally full sized?"

Hahaha I laughed so hard at that part, mostly cos I was also feeling a similar excitement to Cooper (yea a giant train! I would've loved one of those as a kid!)... then I realised, yeah... all trains are giant hahaha
Majorkami chapter 7 . 7/15/2018
Nicely done! I enjoy your writing style. Your descriptions of both places and people are crisp and clean, enabling me to picture them vividly in only a couple sentences. The dialogue feels natural, so much so that I can almost hear the characters speaking to each other.

Overall this fic feels warm and comfortable, just the kind of read I needed on a night shift. Thanks for posting : )
Guest chapter 6 . 7/11/2018
Me: this fic is awesome!
Me (after reading SteveBucky chap): THIS FIC IS TRUE BEAUTY! :D :D
(Ok so that’s a slight dramatization, but i do seriously need more Steve and Bucky in my life. Plus this whole fic is pretty awesome anyway)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2018
This is so making laugh, I love avengers off-duty fics. Though I am finding Dr. Strange vaguely creepy...
Uia chapter 7 . 7/1/2018
awesome job...God bless
Amyharrison chapter 7 . 6/29/2018
This is like therapy after infinity war. Especially peter omg have more of him please.
AndurilofTolkien chapter 7 . 6/29/2018
sweet
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
like :)
suteko1 chapter 2 . 6/25/2018
this was both fun and relaxing. we need more like this. think you will do them?
Gratsunaru chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
Peter and pietro :'v
TisBee chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
Looking forward to more!