That hurt my soul. (good way/bad way). I hate liking these stories that hurt Lance but still very good.

So, uh...hey.
heyheroics...hahaha, get it?
Who am I kidding, I haven't read your stories in decaphebes. And I am so, so, so, so, SO sorry for that. Your content is amazing, this one-shot proves that, and I should have been reading that content so I could tell you how breathtaking your writing is.
This was so gruesome and real and horribly predictable (that's a compliment, 'cause I didn't want my suspicions to happen and it did accordingly, making me feel dread and hopelessness - the signs of good writing), i'm so happy I decided to read it. Though its not a big thing, I can tell that you have a knack for writing just by the clever detail about Coran's bath - that told the reader that it was sudden, that this was a story about a tragedy that suddenly happened, and that just amplifies the feelings of Lance and the reader in response. I had to mention that somewhere, because I thought that was pure genius! Just...everything about this was spectacular. I'm definitely gonna go on a binge of your work now:) Thank you for spending your time writing this, and so many other works!

As Always,

Happy Writing~

Oh crud
Woe this really god!